Fortune and the Fox

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TheHyruleFool

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04-26-2013

Well, earlier I posted inquiring if there were any AhrixMiss Fortune smuts out there, and the general response to that was that there weren't. I guess I gotta write it for myself (even though I don't think I'm all that good) so here's a link to keep you guys up to date on it. I'll try to update as much as I can, but school can be erratic so if I don't update for a week or something sorry in advance.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9238807/...ne-and-the-Fox
Currently Completed Chapters:
1. The Victory and the Party
2. Into the Fox's Den
3. From the Kitchen to the Shower
4. Passion and Pan-Cakes
5. The Bleeding Monk
6. Eavesdropping Around the Left Corner
7. Removed Humanity
8. The Ungloved Hand
9. As Foxy As Before
10. The Nightmare
11. Full Circle
12. The Second Date
Remember: Feedback is very appreciated


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Eyowyn

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04-26-2013

PWP isn't entirely my thing, but hurray for you for getting out there and writing something for the community!

(pwp=porn without plot)


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AerithRayne

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04-26-2013

If you could do us a favor and "double enter" between each paragraph so it doesn't look like a giant wall of text, it would be greatly appreciated. I know people who stop reading due to it being visually overwhelming.

Also, you have the title running into the first line. Might wanna fix that.

For the record, I truly am helping (more than Jarvan, I swear!). I want your story to be successful ^_^


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Eyowyn

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04-26-2013

Quote:
Originally Posted by AerithRayne View Post
If you could do us a favor and "double enter" between each paragraph so it doesn't look like a giant wall of text, it would be greatly appreciated. I know people who stop reading due to it being visually overwhelming.

Also, you have the title running into the first line. Might wanna fix that.

For the record, I truly am helping (more than Jarvan, I swear!). I want your story to be successful ^_^
I can never get my paragraphs to work right, sigh.


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Yasako

Senior Member

04-26-2013

Please fix your punctuation.

It makes all the difference.


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TheHyruleFool

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04-27-2013

Sorry for all the errors, I guess doing direct document transfer doesn't work well. Guess I'll have to do copy-and-paste from now on.
Edit: Christ whenever I try to put in extra spacing so it isn't a wall of text FF just filters it out and I've been sitting here trying different methods to get some kind of line break and nothing works


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TheHyruleFool

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04-27-2013

Chapter 2 is up, tell me what you all think.


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AerithRayne

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04-27-2013

I actually just write the blasted story in FF, and I generally don't have problems with spaces between my paragraphs. I don't know specifically what causes the difference, but I'm sorry the site's giving you a difficult time <3


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saladeo

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04-27-2013

Yay, but Gp is handsome i think XD. No ho.mo, cmon the beard is freking awesome


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AerithRayne

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04-27-2013

Out of all the communities to be afraid of dealing with the consequences of thinking a champ looks good, this place is the least of your concerns. Whether it's ho.mo or just appreciation, it's okay. So no need to tag it every time :3

Good lord. Piss, damn, hell, and bastard are allowed, but hot ho.mo and cr.ap? Strangest filters ever.