Support role (maybe Top?), because we don't really have a support from Demacia who 'fits in' with the rest of the Demacians, meaning armor, battle-ready, front lines, etc. This is just bare-bones concept - there are very few actual numbers in this, I'll wait to see what people think before contemplating those kinds of things.
Hm, sounds interesting, I like the Q in particular. There are a couple things... I don't like that he doesn't get bonus from his Q if it is an assist. It wouldn't be very fun to have a champion that is punished for getting a kill. I would make it on a kill or assist.
His ult needs to be fleshed out in more detail... would it be like a sivir ult? His E would be pretty powerful but doesn't seem to OP..
Btw, his passive right now is very similar to Heimer's (+20 hp/5 to all nearby champs and towers/turrets) Maybe make it slightly different, such as every time he uses an auto attack it heals himself and nearby champions over time? Or maybe on spell cast?
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I really like the idea of having a "support" role from a Demacian character. I have a few things though (then again, who am I to criticize?)
You should try figure out your X and Y values. I know this can be hard, if you put them too high which I would be tempted to do, the forums will say hes OP. And if you put them too low, he's useless :/
The Q cast (Blade of Justice) would work well if it followed the same arc idea as Annie's Incinerate or Cho'Gath's Feral Scream as I think in a team fight, clicking to 2 points on the field in a split second could cause for your move to miss entirely or be set too far apart and not cast, meaning you've wasted 1, maybe 2 vital seconds that an ally could have used the knock back for.
Your W (Bodyguard) is good. However, "If Vaughn shields himself and the shield is broken, he gains X Armor and MR for X seconds." I think is off. Rather than just giving him a flat, say, 15 MR and Armor, I think it would be better to give him +15% bonus MR and Armor, that way, if you decide to build him more tanky like a Leona, his bonus will scale up better with his armor rather than a flat total. Just an Idea, as I said, I'm no expert.
Your E (Unbreakable Courage) is a great idea but I think it would have to have a relatively long cool down at earlier levels to compensate.
Your R (Paragon) is where I run into some difficulty. From what I understand, Vaughn becomes untargetable and if you kill one of his allies, you are dealt damage back to you that you did to the target? Now, does this mean that once an ally has died, this ultimate's effect stops or does it persist for a duration? Even so, this is a bit too powerful I am afraid, it makes your enemy team unable to attack anyone for a certain amount of time as if they do, they are 100% killing themselves when Demacian Justice hits them.
If however, he gave the paragon to one ally who returned the damage dealt to him to his attackers upon death, it would be less overpowered, but is very similar to Galio's ult, and since Vaughn also becomes untargetable, it becomes a Kayle and Galio ult combined.
Again though that's just my opinion, don't take it as a "You have to do it like this!".
If you have time, could you give my idea a look and tell me what you think?
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