Qi'Vanas, Daughter of the Void

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Slayer Kast

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03-13-2013

(As a note, I was unaware of the "Reiora" concept at the time I originally came up with this concept.)

Qi'Vanas, Daughter of the Void

Tags: Mage, Melee, Fighter

Lore: WIP (Poll topic here: Qi'Vanas Lore Poll)

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General Summary:

Qi'Vanas is Kassadin's daughter, described in the Journal of Justice as to having been flung into the Void when Malzahar kidnapped her. Kassadin attempted to save her by hurling a Null Sphere at Malzahar, which triggered a Void Portal to open behind them; Malzahar then threw her into it, wherein it closed afterward.

While in the Void, Kassadin's daughter remembered her father's teaching that, should she ever come in contact with the Void, she must accept it into her body in order to survive it. But, as she in the middle of the Void itself, the Void rushes into her like a waterfall, and it quickly begins to affect her physically and mentally - more even than Malzahar and Kassadin combined. Not wanting to give in totally to it, she hangs onto the thought of her father to keep her sanity in check, to keep the Void from taking over. She struggles with efforts to try to leave, while the horrors and terrible power within hound her at every turn.

Flash forward to the present, where Kassadin has gathered the most powerful summoners he could in a ritual to quickly open a portal to the Void and pull his daughter out before closing it again. They are successful, as Kassadin himself reaches in, but they are much too late - have been, as time flows strangely in the Void, if at all. What was once Kassadin's daughter is now Qi'Vanas, a vessel of the void beyond that of the Seer Malzahar. Where Malzahar is a prophet, Qi'Vanas is a monster, a young girl molded by the Void and its creatures, but pulled away before she could be fully transformed. Her sanity is at a fragile breaking point, and it takes all the summoners to suppress her from tearing open a new portal to the Void, which she now considered home.

Where Kassadin sought to bring back his daughter, what came through was no longer her. The Void itself was her family now, and the man who was once her father was nothing more than the man who failed to save her from a life of torment, horrors, and terrible power.
Statistics:

Attack Power: 5 / 10
Defense Power: 3 / 10
Ability Power: 8 / 10
Difficulty: X / 10

Health: 390 (+70)
Health regen: 6.2 (+0.6)
Mana: 390 (+60)
Mana regen: 7.5 (+0.5)
Range: 150
Attack damage: 51 (+3.5)
Attack speed: 0.635 (+2.5%)
Armor: 13 (+3.5)
Magic res.: 30 (+1.25)
Mov. speed: 330

Abilities:

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Innate – Unending Whispers

Qi’Vanas is plagued with whispers coming from the Void, which keeps her sanity in a state of flux; she tends towards isolation as an unconscious defense. Whenever an enemy champion enters within 900 units of Qi'Vanas, she gains 1% bonus Magic Pen every 2 seconds for up to three enemy champions, up to a cap of 18 / 24 / 30%. This bonus resets after five seconds of having no enemies in range.
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Q - Corrupted Swipe
"Go away!"
(Passive): Qi'Vanas auto-attacks apply Void Corruption, dealing magic damage over the next 3 seconds. This damage refreshes on consecutive attacks.
(Active): On her next auto-attack with 11 seconds, Qi'Vanas slams her corrupted claws into her target, dealing bonus magic damage to it. Enemies nearby also become afflicted with Void Corruption.
  • Cooldown: 12 / 11 / 10 / 9 / 8 seconds
  • Cost: 60 / 70 / 80 / 90 / 100
  • Radius of AoE: 200
  • Void Corruption Magic Damage per second: 10 / 15 / 20 / 25 / 30 + (0.1 per ability power)
  • Magic Damage: 70 / 100 / 130 / 160 / 190 + (1.0 per attack damage)
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W - Agonizing Cry
"Father?!"
(Active): Qi'Vanas is tormented with a memory of her past, making her cry out in agony and sorrow. Qi'Vanas lets out a cry over 4 seconds that deals magic damage to all enemies around her. Enemies that are caught within the radius for 3 seconds will become feared.
  • Cooldown: 14 seconds
  • Cost: 75 / 85 / 95 / 105 / 115
  • Radius of AoE: 300
  • Fear Duration: 0.5 / 0.75 / 1.0 / 1.25 / 1.5 seconds
  • Magic Damage per second: 25 / 35 / 45 / 55 / 65 + (0.15 per ability power)
  • Total Magic Damage: 100 / 140 / 180 / 220 / 260 + (0.6 per ability power)
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E - Void Grasp
"Let the Void embrace you!"
(Active): Qi’Vanas reaches her arm through a Void portal and extends it in the target direction, grabbing the first thing it encounters and pulling it and herself together until they collide. If the target grabbed was an enemy, they take magic damage; if the target was an ally, Qi'Vanas will travel to the location the ally was at the time of the grab (not to their current location) and will only expend 80% of the mana cost.
  • Active Cooldown: 16 / 15 / 14 / 13 / 12 seconds
  • Cost: 80 / 90 / 100 / 110 / 120
  • Reduced Cost: 64 / 72 / 80 / 88 / 96
  • Range: 800
  • Magic Damage: 100 / 125 / 150 / 175 / 200 + (0.65 per ability power)
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R - Shattering Void
"BREAK WITH ME!"
(Active): Qi'Vanas reaches into the Void to slam two gigantic Void arms together around the target enemy champion and then explode upon contact, dealing magic damage after a 1-second channel to all enemies caught within the impact and slowing them for the next 2 seconds. The original target champion is stunned instead of slowed for the first second and takes the full amount of damage; other targets take 75% of the damage.
  • Cooldown: 100 / 90 / 80 seconds
  • Cost: 150
  • Cast Range: 600
  • Radius of AoE: 300
  • Arm Length: 400 (Centered with target)
  • Magic Damage to Target: 150 / 250 / 350 + (0.8 per ability power)
  • Magic Damage to Others: 112.5 / 187.5 / 262.5 + (0.6 per ability power)
  • Slow: 30 / 35 / 40%
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To be Reworked


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jis33785

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03-13-2013

omg must have RIOT PLEASE


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Slayer Kast

Senior Member

03-14-2013

Bumping for some critiquing, hopefully.


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Slayer Kast

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03-15-2013

Still looking for some feedback on her kit.


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Death By A Bunny

Senior Member

03-15-2013

Ok, so about the lore
For starters, you just did copy+paste on Kassadins lore for the first paragraph.
Your lore kind of goes against everything depicted about the void in the LoL lore. It's a place of unspeakable horrors and you made it as if Qi'Vanas got out of a ghost ride on a roller coasted and into an amusement park for children. The void obviously left a powerful scar in both Kassadins and Malzahars minds and you just shrug that off with a few deformed pets.
Also, what was her name before she was sacrificed? Why was it changed now to Qi'Vanas? The name format X ' Y is used for actual void creatures, not people who have been to the void and came back.

Now for the skills
Corruption, interesting but not very original. The mechanics are the like Fury except the 20 corruption that comes from landing skills.

Q - This skill is alright. Not much to say without any math involved.

W - Again, not much to say without numbers involved, but nice effects.

E - Imps are way too slow. Even without boots, champions have 330 speed or more, which means your Imps will never catch anyone with basic boots. Boost your Imps movement speed.

R - Basically the same as Nasus and Renekton, nothing new here.

I'm a bit confused though, is this character supposed to be AD, Hybrid or AP? Her passive scales her AD and attack speed, but all of her skills scale off AP, so her passive really has no effect on anything except her basic attack and maybe her Q.

The general idea is nice, but you need to rework your lore and add some numbers to your skills.


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Slayer Kast

Senior Member

03-15-2013

Lore:
The first Void paragraph was intentional, as a lot of the Void champions share this opening in some form or another. I definitely have to go back and rework the Lore, as I left a lot of stuff unexplained for the sake of not making it incredibly long. She's flung into the Void and cannot fathom the unspeakable horrors (can't keep her eyes open, suffering on her knees), but a curious Voidling comes up to her and shields her from the horrorterrors. It seems great for her, but the little imp is slowly corrupting her with Void powers, draining away her humanity. More imps join her, corrupting her faster, and whatever shreds of humanity she has left are all but gone.

And then she's ripped from her new-found home by the requests of her father. Thrust back into a world which she no longer finds home, and a father figure which she no longer recognizes as her father, and loathes instead for ripping her from the Void.

That's what I was going for, anyway. She has a Void name as she was supposed to have adopted it from learning the void names of the creatures, and because she had no apparent canon name in the Journal of Justice.

Passive:
I wanted to give her a similar feel to Kassadin - an anti-mage mage - but I guess the bonus Attack Damage kind of throws that off. I'll be changing this to be much less boring, and more lore-related.

E:
They're supposed to be slow at the start since you can have four out at once, but I might have them scale off of her movement speed.

R:
One of the abilities I had the most trouble coming up with. I might change it to be more "terrifying" and not so much a transformation ult.


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Slayer Kast

Senior Member

03-15-2013

The overhaul is here!

Lore Changes:
- Qi'Vanas' lore has better explained what happened to her while in the Void while chopping out unnecessary details, hopefully. The referenced ritual can be found in the old Journal of Justice.

Statistics:
These changes are to make up for the Qi'Vanas's new passive effects.
- Qi'Vanas's base HP has been reduced to 415, down from 430. Additionally, her HP gained per level has been reduced to 65, down from 75.
- Qi'Vanas's base Attack Damage has been reduced to 50, down from 51.
- Qi'Vanas's base Attack Speed has been reduced to 0.635, down from 0.638. Additionally, her Attack Speed per level has also been reduced to 2.5%, down from 3%.
- Qi'Vanas's base Armor has been reduced to 11, down from 12.

Corruption:
- Qi'Vanas now only gains 15 Corruption on ability hits, down from 20, and gains 2 per auto-attacks, up from 1.
- Qi'Vanas only loses 3 Corruption every second while out of combat, down from 5.

Passive:
- Qi'Vanas has lost her Whispering Corruption passive and has now gained the Voidling Imps passive.
- Voidling Imps provides unique passive effects based on her levels of corruption in addition to her current level.
- This new passive is to promote staying in combat and keeping high levels of Corruption.

  • -> Qi’Soth: 0-25 Corruption, appears when Corruption hits 25 or more. Qi’Soth provides an additional 2 / 3 / 4 / 5% attack speed.
  • -> Qi’Bast: 26-50 Corruption, appears when Corruption hits 50 or more. Qi’Bast reduces the charge time of Horrorterror by 5 seconds.
  • -> Qi’Has: 51-75 Corruption, appears when Corruption hits 75 or more. Qi’Has provides an additional 5% movement speed.
  • -> Qi’Ogg: 76-100 Corruption, appears when Corruption hits 100. Qi’Ogg causes a return of HP equal to 7 / 8 / 9 / 10% of the damage dealt by Qi'Vanas' next auto-attack on a 10-second cooldown.

Q:
- Corrupted Swipe now deals damage in a cone behind the auto-attack target, and now has damage and slow numbers.

W:
- Shadow Jump has been replaced with Void Jump, to differentiate from Zed's similar ability.
- Void Jump causes Qi'Vanas to dash forward as an untargetable beam of Void Energy, dealing magic damage to all enemies in her path and ignoring terrain. Something she might've retained from her father, perhaps?

E:
- Imp Fling has been replaced with Horrorterror, due to the Imps' new location in her passive.
- Every 30 seconds, Qi'Vanas musters enough energy to bring forth a Horrorterror from the Void. This is unaffected by CDR, but can be reduced by the Qi'Bast passive effect.
- Horrorterror summons a grotesque Void creature to the target location, which stealths and reveals the target area for up to 60 seconds. When an enemy walks within range, it chases them for up to five seconds or until it makes contact with its target or another enemy; after either of these happens, it explodes in Void energy, dealing magic damage to all enemies in a small area and fearing them for a few seconds.

R:
- Void King's Grasp has been changed to be more active than a simple transformation ult.
- While active, Void King's Grasp retains the old attack range and maximized Corruption max for 10 seconds.
- While active, Void King's Grasp can be activated a second time on an enemy champion. Giant Void arms will appear on either side of the target and converge on it, dragging any enemies caught between them towards the middle. When the arms collide, each enemy caught takes magic damage and is slowed for the next 3 seconds.
- This change should make the ult much more fearsome when activated, while still maintaining the behemoth form of the gigantic Void beast Qi'Vanas met in her lore.


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RobotWizardMan

Global Network Ops Manager

03-15-2013
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I like this overhaul a lot!


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Slayer Kast

Senior Member

03-15-2013

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Originally Posted by RiotNate View Post
I like this overhaul a lot!
Nate-senpai noticed my champion!

Nah, just kidding.

This overhaul actually went back to a lot of my old ideas for her, mainly the passive and the blink. But thank you!


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Zerglinator

Senior Member

03-15-2013

More Red Posts in Champion Concepts?

Could this be...a new trend?