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Demacia Needs Heroes

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moltres27

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02-08-2013

Buff jarvan


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moltres27

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02-08-2013

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Forgive me, But i think this lore and champion is good enough for riot standards, i pick her in Dominion (in my imagination). Does any Red consider it good enuff? please Stylus ....




Aitis [{A Prostitutes Exoneration}]

The Lore is revised by Moby The White (http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=2863268)


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It was the best of times, and it was the worst of times. Little did Aitis's mother know that her daughter would be seeing her father leave for the last time. Born into a time of despair and poverty, the greatest struggle for her mother had been keeping her alive. Sadly her mother, regarded as the most beautiful women ever born, was forced to choose the dark path to keep her daughter alive. For years she suffered this choice, each day spent silently awaiting the return of her beloved husband-the one man that could release her from this misery. But that day never came for her mother; rather, she remained in that nightmare for the rest of her days.

Aitis dreaded thoughts of her past, but as she grew up she was soon forced to live the very life that her mother had led to provide for her. With every man in Noxus knowing her mother's history, every day became a reminder of a father that abandoned them with nothing-not even a house. With the resemblence of her mother, she quickly became an object of lust to every man, while every man became an object of hatred in her eyes. Within time she too resorted to the miserable life of selling her body each night to any man willing to pay. And each night left her with less money than bad memories. She was a women, born below the heels of men oppressed and sad, she had nowhere else to go. She had to survive and that meant enduring the misery and torture just as her mother had. From the moment she first began her ascendence to adulthood, the eyes of every Noxian man became drawn to her. Each night men came upon her chambers to discover the very image of perfection and beauty lying scantily clothed upon her bed awaiting lustful punishment. Her infamy quickly spread across the land, and soon Aitis became the very symbol for lust and immoral love. Hearing about the tales of this infamous mistress, a man so hungry with lust came to visit Aitis with nothing but wicked intentions. Weak and out of options, she had to let him enter her place the same day each week. What he did to her was so cruel and inhuman, but her lack of strength prevented her from raising her voice or stopping him. Each time he would leave her unclothed and bruised, throwing the money on the floor as he left. Every week the same roaring footsteps signaled his approach before he would kick the door open to find Aitis as motionless as a dead picture. It was always the same-without feeling-just an object of adoration. Aitis would wrap herself in her arms while crying bitterly; all the clothes she had would be torn by him, he would use the Gods blessing only bequeathed to women as if they were instruments of violence or music.


Aitis would scream inside as the violent rhythmic movements would shake her to the very core. Her soul would be left vibrating twitching in agony of the memory. Tears ran down the stretch of her body, silently marking each moment spent suffering. The man would tear all her clothes before leaving her to shivering, cold, and alone on a tear soaked mattress. Oh how much she hated him, each week dreading his return, and each day praying for salvation to come through that door.

And so it was that one day when the door opened some other figure stood there , his face behind the shadows as he stood defending the light as it pierced through the door and filled it. Aitis instantly felt something-something different. The man whoever he was, took off his coat and placed around Aitis's shoulders as she trembled with fear. He told her not to fear, that he was different from other men. He told Aitis that he wasn’t there for her body, but rather he was there for her wounds-her emotional wounds. He told her that he knew her father and that her father wanted this man to deliver a message to Aitis if anything were to ever happen to him. He told the stranger of how he loved Aitis greatly, and how he used to sing about Aitis, and lastly he told her of how her father died. He explained to Aitis that her father was like an elder brother to him-telling him all about Aitis and her mother. Her mother was a Valkyrien, and the same blood flowed through her making her a Valkyrien as well. It wasn't long after her parents met that they fell in love. But when a Valkyrien marries her true love she has to seal her powers in an object locked forever. So her father safely carried the locket which held the powers of her mother, for if a Valkyrien wore it the powers would be unleashed. Without it Valkyriens were powerless, much like how Aitis was powerless to stop those who abused her.

Now only one Valkyrien remained and that was Aitis. The man opened his palm revealing the locket her mother once wore, entrusted to him by her father to be delivered upon his death. Aitis couldn’t believe what had happened after he left, She still felt it, the feeling she felt when the man had just stepped in the room. After that man had left, she wasn’t sure if she should wear the locket or not as she stood before the mirror while torn piles of clothes gathered at her feet-her body uncovered as she gazed at the reflection of the shiny locket. She took the locket and finally placed it around her neck, and in that instant power flowed through her body covering her in rays of light. Every curve of her body slowly became covered by what appeared to be clothlike material, but was seemingly made of light. It filled her with great power, and she knew that she no longer had to fear any man.


A moment later the door flew open and there stood her weekly visitor-the man who had tortured her for months. He slammed the door behind him, furious too see Aitis not prepared for him he leapt towards her. But Aitis was waiting, and she just smiled knowing that the locket would protect her. Every time the men had come before the neighbors would hear the muffled screams of Aitis. Today they heard shrieks of agony and suffering. The only thing different was today they weren't Aitis’s….

After her vengeance was struck she finally walked out into the streets, the gentle man's coat and the locket covering her. She walked alone, looking in the dark alleyways searching for the faces of men who had used her and abused her, and when she found them she punished them. She was a beacon of hope for the poor and the lost. The light from her locket which now had turned into armor was like a beacon of hope for the suffering. Any man who ever had wrong intentions soon saw their death walking across the street. Aitis hid her vengeance behind her locket, and she searched for her savior-the man who delivered her salvation in the palm of his hand and the only man she ever saw…


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Passive: Her abilities gain bonus effect or act differently based upon her state. When she is standing still, her Elegance bar fills up, when she is moving her Vengeance bars fills up. One bar always remains empty. If she moves her Elegance bars start to deplete and her Vengeance will increase, Vice-versa. Casting her basic skills doesn’t consume her state.



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Q skill: a slow skill shot that travels in opposite direction, from maximum range of the skill to the direction from which point Aitis casted her ability, dealing damage to all units along its path.
Elegance bonus: the skills shots taunts enemy towards its direction, for a short duration.
Vengeance Bonus: The damage and the missile speed and range are greatly increased.



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W skill: she spins channels for a second (castable while moving). It remains there until Aitis reactivates the ability, only 1 trap can remain active. She can reactivate this ability to deal damage to all units standing on it, It deals More damage if both Aitis and her enemy stand on it, and knocks them in.(very small knock back)
Elegance bonus: it increases movement speed of allies on it, and it provides vision around it.
Vengeance bonus: The damage is greatly increased (Greatly)


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E skill: Aitis sends out light from the orb that deals Damage over time, However she can cast the skill again to cancel the Damage on enemy and heal herself instead
Elegance bonus: She heals herself more if he chooses to
Vengeance bonus: it slows enemy, and deals more damage


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Ultimate: it’s a skill that is partly controlled by her movements, when any of her state bars reaches full she can activate the ability (Toggle), to consume the state, but the state also regenerates at same speed.
She can active Pure Elegance toggle or Pure Vengeance toggle,
Pure elegance state: She gains 4 gold per 10 second, heals all herself and her allies, healing allies more than herself every few seconds, and more health regeneration to all her allies all over the map who are out of her healing radius. If she doesn't move much she won’t leave this state
Pure vengeance: Her basic attacks get empowered Dealing Ability damage . Gains bonus ability power and movement speed. Her attacks Also deal damage based on maximum health , this doesn't work on same champion for next 10 seconds. While active toggle, if she stops for very small duration, the Vengeance bar will fall.


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Question Hound

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02-08-2013

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moltres27:
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Aitis [{A Prostitutes Exoneration}]

The Lore is revised by Moby The White (http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=2863268)



Can you put this in the Champion Creation forum? It really doesn't belong in this thread. Sorry, but downvote.


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moltres27

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02-08-2013

i wanna meet parrot before phreak (The list to do before die changed)


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moltres27

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02-08-2013

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Question Hound:
Can you put this in the Champion Creation forum? It really doesn't belong in this thread. Sorry, but downvote.

so i have but stylus doesnt come there


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SteelerKing

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02-08-2013

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Harrow:
Good old Demacian "Justice." Select a victi...er, suspect based on vague circumstantial evidence and send a brigade of shiny-armored children playing at soldier to go murder them.

You spelled Riot's Justice wrong.


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Pius Leviticus

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02-08-2013

Lord Ironstylus! As we gaze upon you, resting on the perch of deliberation, we humbly await your revelation! Your next champion will be seconded only by Leona!


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Question Hound

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02-08-2013

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moltres27:
so i have but stylus doesnt come there


A few quick things -- if you improved your spelling, grammar and punctuation, as well the overall formatting of your post, you might find that it receives more attention and discussion. As it stands right now, it's not really that polished, so people won't really take it seriously.

Also, that champion's lore is way too mature for League of Legends. Prostitution isn't something that really belongs here.


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Xephen

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02-08-2013

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moltres27:
i wanna meet parrot before phreak (The list to do before die changed)


Yeah know it. I have major respect for the bird, more so than most of the Riot employees.


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moltres27

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02-08-2013

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Hi! I guess I should write an introductory post at some point (I've been here for nine months or so), but I spent my first six months at Riot pitching new champions; I helped pitch a run of about ten champs that began with Zed. Nowadays, I work on champion biographies, voiceover scripts, and tooltips.

Of all the champions I've helped pitch, I definitely have a fondness for the female champs: Vi, Quinn, and a couple more that have yet to see release. Vi and Quinn in particular borrow a lot from my personal inspirations.

I also work really, really hard so Runaan doesn't fire me! Please tell Runaan what a good job I'm doing so Runaan'll let me go home before midnight!

I'll give a full rundown of my story when I write that upcoming introductory post.

not a great job