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01-29-2013

Greetings, forums.

I'm a game designer specializing in multiplayer content, and I love League of Legends. I was recently laid off, so I have a lot of free time. Link me your concepts, and I will provide an in-depth critique as well as advice.

I will do my best to respond as quickly as possible, though sleep, life obligations, and/or a sufficient backlog may delay your review. I will handle these as first-come-first-serve.

Please make sure your concept meets the following criteria before posting, or I will not review it:

Required:

  • An Innate, Q, W, E, and R (no missing abilities)
  • All time-related ability information (Effect durations, Cooldowns)
  • General ability scaling information (AD vs. AP)
  • If your concept uses a resource other than mana, describe it in full (or just say "manaless" or "energy-based" somewhere)

Not required, but will be judged if included:
  • General description of ability power level (i.e. low-high base damage, low-high item scaling)
  • A general description of the character's theme
  • A short description of intended role/gameplay



Completed Reviews:

(Page 1)
1. Hazard, the Mask of Zaun
2. Vash, The Ghost from the Machine
3. Mikael, the Steam Punk
4. Shu, the Demon Knight
5. Zenn, the Frog Blade
6. Ac'thota: The Icathian Emissary

(Page 2)
7. Migna, the Scatterbrained Genius


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shadowcrusnik

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01-29-2013

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3059134

Please take a look at dis, me and my brother made it.

EDIT: NVM looked at criteria!


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Pixel Spark

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01-29-2013

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3027136

Here is my champion. Hazard, the Mask of Zaun.


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NobSaiboot

Senior Member

01-29-2013

If you got time I got one that could use some critiquing.

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3054835

Sucks that you lost your job. Where did you work?


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RogueVector

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SephirothWontDie

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EpicFrogNinja

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01-29-2013

Free in-depth reviews? Well then, you're awesome for doing this.

Could you please look over mine?
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3025148
Thanks


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01-29-2013

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pixel Spark View Post
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3027136

Here is my champion. Hazard, the Mask of Zaun.
Completed. I'll be updating the OP with links to reviews.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Cryoshell17 View Post
If you got time I got one that could use some critiquing.

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3054835

Sucks that you lost your job. Where did you work?
WB Games, on Guardians of Middle-earth.

Starting on this one. Sorry the reviews take a while, getting into the swing of things. I'll probably get to about one or two more tonight.


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OuttaControl56

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01-29-2013

Well thank you for doing such a service, my dear sir.

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3055445

Take your time, man. Nobody should complain about how slow you're reviewing. The fact is you're reviewing xP


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01-29-2013

Quote:
Completed.
Quote:
Originally Posted by RogueVector View Post
Completed, last concept for the night.

Will start with Shu, the Demon Knight tomorrow.


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