League Judgment - Lux

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Lunik

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10-17-2010

Great read! I didn't see that coming.

Gj riot!


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Corvusa

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10-17-2010

All We Need now is her in-game!


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Hunstman13

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10-17-2010

grammar error, "and" should not follow a comma.


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Paddster1

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10-17-2010

Wait...Garen isn't an illusion?Its not normally the real person.


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tys

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10-17-2010

.... .. ..... Demaciaaaaaa


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Shimrra3

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10-17-2010

Am I the only one who thinks Garen is in too many of these? (Unavoidable this time, I know...)


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Euant

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10-17-2010

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hunstman13 View Post
grammar error, "and" should not follow a comma.
I don't know where you're specifically taking this from but "and" can follow a comma if it is at least after the second item in a list of three or more items in one sentence. "My favorite things to eat are pineapples, chocolate cake, and chicken pot pie."

Also, was Garen an illusion or not? You said he was leaving as the illusion was broken so I'm guessing he was really there.


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Stiletto

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10-17-2010

Awesome post. And, I'm impressed you revised the story not to include stealth and recon abilities. :P


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JorDeeee

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10-17-2010

so many demacians lol we need a new town


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Volpes

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10-17-2010

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Originally Posted by MeOdd8 View Post
She tried to be like Swain and try to see through the illusion, but failed hard... Just a normal teenager aye?
Swain failed too. He only thought he had won.


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