Devor, the Dark Rider

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DarthDevor

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12-08-2012

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I Give riot full permission to create this champ if they want to. I do not need anything in return, and really why would you need anything, they created your champion.

Name: Devor
Title: The Dark Rider
Attributes: Melee, Fighter, Bruiser, Pusher, tanky, AD
Appearance: Black Armor, and Helmet, with red plum. A White Horse, and a sword, spear, and rectangular shield.
Species: Human

Lore:
Devor is a mysterious rider, that has struck fear into the hearts of many. His story is dark, and is no place to research for the faint in heart.

His story began when he was young boy who group as an orphan, who's parents left after he turned seven. He lived in Noxus for many years, becoming battle hardened, until he stole a horse and left for Ionia. When he arrived he learned of the invasion plans, and he began training himself with a sword, spear, and shield, becoming a warrior that very deadly. He soon after began searching for a way to improve his powers, then he learned of the dark magic many said was a curse. He learned the dark magic slowly but mastered it before the Noxian Invasion.

When Noxus invaded he attacked small groups by himself, easily destroying them, affiliating himself with no one. He saw the cause as lost and left. He went farther and farther into darkness, until many feared him. He rode alone at many times, but a small group of Demancians calling themselves the "Crusaders of Light" attacked him when he was riding on his horse, through a mountain pass. he killed all but one of them easily, but he saw that the last better. The fought for six hours until they were both exhausted and wounded. They left each other. Devor had been badly wounded and his face was covered in scars. He joined the Institute of War, so when the time came again, he would kill the man that had wounded him.

"Those who have threatened me, will find me and my horse at their house at night, and they will never see light again."- Devor, soon after joined the League of Legends.


Base Stats:
HP: 450(Plus 85 Per Level)
MS: 345
AP: 0
AD: 55(Plus 3.75 per level)
AS: 0.668
Armor: 20(Plus 3 per level)
MR: 30
Recourse: N/A
Range: 175


Abilities:

Passive: Cavalier's Power
Devor inspires his allies, and gains an AD boost for three second after being out of battle for seven seconds.

Universal effect: All Allies, gain 5 AD and 3 Armor.
AD Boost is leveled up at level 6, 11, and 16.
AD Boost: 10%/15%/20%/22%


Q- Beckoning Death
Devor lunges at an enemy stabbing them with his spear causing them to bleed and silencing enemies within a small AoE Area. After using this skill Devor will use his sword over his spear, and will block the next incoming basic attack with his shield.

Active-
AoE Area- 370
Silence Time(Seconds):.5/.7/.9/1.1/1.3
Damage- 100/115/130/145/160(Plus .25 per Bonus AD)
Bleeding Time: 1.5/1.7/1.9/2.1/2.2
Bleeding Damage Per Second: 60/65/70/75/80(Plus .1 per Bonus AD)
CD: 12
Range: 600



W- Wrath of Devor
Devor unleashes his anger from his childhood with his spear and dark magic, dealing a small amount of Magic Damage for three seconds and attack damage. Devor, throws his spear while being infused with dark magic.
*To Clarify this Devor Throws his spear and it deals both Magic and Physical Damage.

Magic Damage- 50/55/60/65/70(plus 0.1 AP)
Damage- 120/140/160/180/200(Plus .45 Per Bonus AD)
CD- 13/14/15/16/17
Range-500

Passive-
Devor gains 15 Attack Damage and 10 MR, and 7 Armor, not per level.


E- Veteran's Honor
Devor Jumps a short distance, dealing Magic damage where he lands over an AoE Area. After landing Devor gains an AS Boost for three seconds.

AS Bonus: 15%/20%/25%/30%/35%
AoE Area- 400
Magic Damage: 100/130/160/190/220(Plus .45 per Bonus AD)
Range: 550
CD-15/14/12/11/10

R-Power of Darkness
Devor channels his dark Magic and goes into an attacking frenzy on an enemy, dealing true damage, normal damage, and gains an AD and AS boost for ten seconds.

True Damage: 150/200/250(Plus.15 Per AD)
Damage- 200/300/350(Plus .15 per AD)

AD Boost: 10%/20%/30%
AS Boost: 20%
CD-90

Passive-
Devor Gains plus 5% MS and 4% AD, not per level.


Playing As Devor

Use the bursts you have to deal large amounts of damage or gain control of a lane.
Use Veteran's Honor to either break away from an enemy, or to go to an enemy. Use the AoEs to catch an enemy team.

Playing Against Devor
Devor has a high burst effect, try to counter pick him with high health champions, or high sustain champions.
Devor's ultimate deals high amounts of damage, be careful while in lane after six, as Devor can kill you quickly.


Speech-
Upon Selection- "They dare threaten me?"
Move 1-"Yes, yes let us get this over with."
Move 2-"They will feel my wrath!"
Move 3-"The path clear, why are you taking this way?"
Attack 1-"You like my spear?"
Attack 2-"I will destroy the wrecked scum!"
Q-"Die!"
W-"Feel my wrath!"
E-"Rah....die!"
R-I will destroy you!.....Feel my power!"
Death-"Noooo! I will have my revenge!"
Joke-"Let's get to the point of this!"
Taunt-"You shall know death."




Edits:

Lessened True Damage for Ultimate, Got rid of MS Boost from E, Q- Bleed time and bonus damage reduced, W- Wording changed, R wording changed. Base stats reduced. Specified W animation more so, Q Now only blocks Auto Attacks.

3/11/13- Edited base stats. Added sword range. Made R CD Higher.
3/12/13- Major Edits.
*Removed Block on Beckoning Death
**Removed downward Scaling CD on R
*Removed Sword
*Other smaller edits throughout Champion
* Armor Level brought down massively.


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12-08-2012

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12-09-2012

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Skogul

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12-09-2012

Passive - It's alright, but it could use some changes.

Q - Is fine, though it could use some reductions.

W - A good skill and a good idea with the mixed damage.

E - Overall this ability can be a bit of "too much advantage" against opposing champions and would not blend well with the other abilities. A rework should fix this one.

R - This ability for an ultimate isn't a bad idea, but it could also use some rework and rearrangements.


It's a good champ, though I have yet to imagine how he will look in-game. Since LoL lacks in the "Champ on Mount" sort of type.


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DarthDevor

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12-09-2012

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Originally Posted by Mėtsurugi View Post
Passive - It's alright, but it could use some changes.

Q - Is fine, though it could use some reductions.

W - A good skill and a good idea with the mixed damage.

E - Overall this ability can be a bit of "too much advantage" against opposing champions and would not blend well with the other abilities. A rework should fix this one.

R - This ability for an ultimate isn't a bad idea, but it could also use some rework and rearrangements.


It's a good champ, though I have yet to imagine how he will look in-game. Since LoL lacks in the "Champ on Mount" sort of type.
Thanks for the review. I will edit him.


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The5lacker

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12-09-2012

25 AD per level? 18 Armor per level? 110 Health per level? Are you INSANE?
http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wik...f_Legends_Wiki
Start looking through champions and adjust your numbers. Holy hell, even if he didn't have ANY abilities, he'd be the most OP champion ever.

Passive - So...they gain a crazy boost for three seconds...after being out of combat? Huh?

Q - Really poor damage scaling and the passive seems a touch powerful. Even Pantheon's requires that he does things in order to block attacks.

W - No idea what it does. Does he throw his spear at someone? Does he blast an area with magic? What? Also, if that passive is per level, you are out of your mind.

E - Damage scaling is low and for some reason the cooldown increases with level. That's not normally how things work. Other than that, a 650 range leap is a bit strong for a gap closer.

Ult - Again, really poor scaling (30% bonus AD scaling on an Ult? Really?), but overall it's not too bad.


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DarthDevor

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12-09-2012

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Originally Posted by The5lacker View Post
25 AD per level? 18 Armor per level? 110 Health per level? Are you INSANE?
http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wik...f_Legends_Wiki
Start looking through champions and adjust your numbers. Holy hell, even if he didn't have ANY abilities, he'd be the most OP champion ever.

Passive - So...they gain a crazy boost for three seconds...after being out of combat? Huh?

Q - Really poor damage scaling and the passive seems a touch powerful. Even Pantheon's requires that he does things in order to block attacks.

W - No idea what it does. Does he throw his spear at someone? Does he blast an area with magic? What? Also, if that passive is per level, you are out of your mind.

E - Damage scaling is low and for some reason the cooldown increases with level. That's not normally how things work. Other than that, a 650 range leap is a bit strong for a gap closer.

Ult - Again, really poor scaling (30% bonus AD scaling on an Ult? Really?), but overall it's not too bad.
Alright. Thanks for the review I will edit some more. I was thinking about the health, any way, I see where are coming from with it all with his armor he getting about two free cloth armors a level, and he getting a free pick ax per level. Editing.


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