(PanickingAttacks fourth design) Odium the Prophet of Hatred

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PanickingAttack

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10-23-2012

Odium, the Prophet of Hatred
A guy I was thinking about for a time and now I hope to see what the community would think about him. This would be my 4th champion design and I’ll post the other ones soon.

Role: Tanky dps (Somewhat), Assassin/Diver

He plays as an aggressive person in most cases. He uses a new resource system called wrath. See the Innate ability for details.


Base Stats
Health: 438 (+87 per level) = 2004
Health Regen: 6.8 per 5 (+ .74 per level) = 20.1 per 5
Mana type: Wrath (Health too when he’s using his W)
Amount of Wrath: 30 + (0.25 Total AD)
Damage: 52 (3.5 per level) = 115
Movement Speed: 325
Armor: 17 (+3 per level)
Magic Resist: 30 (+ 0.8 per level) = 44.4
Attack Speed: .658 (2.77% per level)
Attack range: 125

Bio
Gender: Male
Race: (currently) Unidentified magical being, (formerly) Sancti
Age: 52
Nationality: None
Side: Chaotic (Enemy of all)

Appearance
Size and Body structure: A moderately muscular male shadow figure coming to a life sized shaped. He has eye sockets, a mouth, a nose, and nothing else around the head. Instead of black, he is colored in crimson/maroon. A vortex like scar around the skin where his heart is. His eye sockets are colored in dark/black purple with dried up tears down the eyes to the cheeks (colored the same way). He regenerates blood and flesh at a very high rate. Height : 6ft 5inch
Equipment: Has armor from the feet to lower chest (does not include gauntlets). The leg armor is like the Japanese samurai plate. Boots and shin guards lean into a more european medieval design. It is colored black with gold/brown straps to keep them from falling apart. Has two blades created from the iron and carbon in his blood cells. They were condensed so hard with other minerals to create a metal 20 times harder than diamond. The hilts are made out of the skin of his former human body.

Personality
Hates everything. Actually, he is ****ing nuts now.

Lore
As the embodiment of destruction and chaos, his race contradicts his current nature. The Sacti were a small group very closed out from the world due to their weak sense of trust. And soon, they were right to be so. As masters of healing and restoration, violence was literally non existent, But they did have powerful protectors, the peace keepers. Visitors and travelers are usually not fully accepted but are welcomed to their kingdom. Thus, one visitor proved to bring down the entire race. After persuading the Emperor himself to consider a more open kingdom to the world, the peace keepers were pulled back and relieved from duty temporary as an attempt to show that they welcomed the other kingdoms and their cultures and trade to pass on to one another. But it never happened. After the peace keepers were relieve from duty, the strange visitor was a messenger of the void. The kingdom was flooded with beasts, trying to destroy one of earth's remaining hope of teaching peace, harmony, and alliance. Vitalius, a peace keeper, ran out of fear. He wandered Valoran for months and managed to survive without any food or water due to the unique body structure of the Sancti. But even so, his body gave out when he reached the door step of a Monastery. He found himself chained inside, being greeted by an aging monk and a murderous boy(Vladimir). With the monk feeling the energy that lies inside the worn out Sancti, his body was ripped of blood and flesh for years due to his regenerating body, being fed enough to just live as a resource. Torture and pain had caused Vitalius to lose his sanity and his rationality. He became an empty shell of hate towards not only humanity, but life and its vicious nature. He grew to hate...everything. With becoming completely immune to pain for years of torture and being fed on, he watched how the boy and monk trained on their ability to control the fluid of life. Taking notes mentally was easy due to torture being something that the body's nerves no longer felt. With enough knowledge, he knows that the only problem that stops escaped was his skin. The chains hooks punctured inside and back out the other end. So the only was to get out... was to lose it. Years later, Vladimir himself revisited the temple years after his final ritual, only to be seen by a gruesome sight that even terrified him. Vitalius had used his magic to rip out all of his skin. Now, he is just a figure with the color of crimson on his new skin. With fiber and jelly like substances as his outer layer, he is no longer human. He continues to eat the skin of the former body as he creates two metal swords 20 times harder than even diamond out of the blood that spilled out of his closing wounds. He simply stares at Vladimir with the gaze of a nightmare and speaks: "What is wrong now boy?" And dash at him at the speed of sound. If Vladimir hadn't turn into a pool of blood right on that second and seeped out of the cracks of the temple, he would of been beheaded. Unsatisfied with his escape, he runs out to seek death. He had ravaged an entire town in less than a day, without a trace of anything. Under full alert of an unknown killer, Institute officials were trying to solve the case to no avail. Arriving in Ionia for blood, he was met with 4 champions, Udyr, Lee sin, Master Yi, and Irelia. After a close and well fought battle, he was kicked into the wall by Lee sin, pinned by Udyr. Later that day, he was then runic chained after being sent to the Institute of War. Under full imprisonment, he is watched by orbs instead of guards. However, he is placed in the league to sate his hunger for battle. Otherwise, if he becomes blood starved for too long, the results could be unpredictably horrifying. He now sits in the empty room calling himself as the Prophet of Hatred. The very day he tossed the name of Vitalius into the dust and renamed him self as Odium.

Log Entry 39 - Incident 8 - "Summoner Kurexin was too interested in Odium and attempted to research him at close range. Result: the only DNA to confirm that he was there, was the vein sticking out of the chamber's keyhole..."

Incident 1 - Arrival at the Institute
Odium was just sent to the institute. Summoners could easily read the mind and the dark past that comes with it. But with an incurable hate, he cannot be saved. That was proven when they attempted to apply a sleeping shot when he bit off one of their hands clean off. He was immediately sent to the chamber without question.

Incident 7 - Don't ever give a fork
The chamber opens with 4 guards keeping watch. One passes a plate of food. Odium slowly eats with his mouth due to his bounded hands. However, the pack that had the food came with a plastic fork as well. Immediately, Odium picks up the fork at throws it so hard that it was enough to puncture through one of the guards cheeks. Sleeping gas was later pushed into the chamber, sending Odium to a deep sleep.

Innate: Hostility – Odium gets 15% wrath per auto attack and 20% per skill use (Only if they hit successfully hit) (Q will get 20% if at least one stab hits). For every 3 auto attacks or spells, Odium’s next auto attack will strike twice dealing 60% of his total AD for each and gaining 10% for each of the strikes. One deals physical damage and one deals magical damage. Every time he does this, he gains a “Crimson” stack that only stacks up ONCE. Crimson will be consumed when a skill that deals damage successfully hits an enemy(s). Crimson will increase the damage of the skill by a percentage equal to his current wrath (Q gains increase damage in ALL stabs). All of his wrath points are consumed after use. For example, using 45 wrath would increase the damage of the ability consuming wrath by 45%.

Q – Eviscerate
Odium jabs 3 times in a small line for .5 second, dealing physical damage to all enemies in it. Each jab deals bonus damage if any targets are right in front of him during the whole time.
Damage: 25/40/55/70/85 per strike
Damage (when the targets are in front): 30/47/64/81/98 per strike
Bonus AD Ratio per strike: 0.35
Bonus AD Ratio per strike (when in front): 0.40
Cooldown: 10/9.5/9/8.5/8
Range: 350

W – Painkilling Hunger
Passive:Odium's basic attacks causes enemies to bleed, taking physical damage over time for 2.5 seconds. Odium also heals on his basic attacks.
Active: Odium will rip blood out of a targeted enemy, applying the bleeding affect. It will also deal initial physical damage and heal for half of the damage dealt by it. If the bleeding effect is already on the target, this will cause the target to burst in blood, causing the target to bleed profusely, dealing higher physical damage over time for 3.5. If Odium remains close to the targets vicinity while bleeding profusely, he will have an attack speed buff.
Damage over time: 22/29/36/44/52
Bonus AD Scaling: 0.1
Heal on basic attacks: 10/14/18/22/26
Initial damage: 50/80/110/140/170
Bonus AD Scaling of Initial: 0.5
Damage over time when bleeding profusely: 42/51/60/69/78
Bonus AD Scaling (profusely): 0.15
Attack speed buff: 18/26/34/42/50 %
Range: 350
Cooldown: 17/16/15/14/13

E – Frenzied Hacker

Odium starts sprinting, increasing his movement speed for 3 seconds. During the time, Odium can recast this ability on an enemy, causing him to leap at the target and hack at it in 2 simultaneous strikes, dealing damage and stunning them for 1.25 seconds.
Base Damage: 70/110/150/190/230
Bonus AD ratio: 0.75
Movement speed increase: 28/32/36/40/44%
Cooldown: 12
Range: 650 (About as much range as Maokai W)

R – The Path to Chaos
Odium shouts in distress, dealing a small amount of magic damage to nearby champions. He becomes the ultimate fighter, gaining stat boosts on attack damage, and life steal for 7 seconds. Using Wrath will also cause him to regenerate some passively per second for 3 seconds.
Shout damage: 100/175/250
Bonus AD ratio: 0.6
Regenerates wrath per second: 5/7/9%
Attack damage increase: 9/12/15%
Life Steal: 18/22/26%
Cooldown: 110/100/90


Item Suggestions
Merc treads/Ninja tabi = for durability
Blood thirster = Kill thirster
Frozen mallet = hp, damage, slow...
last whisper = Burst damage becomes ridiculous
Guardian angel = Durability / resurrection
Brutalizer - Yomus ghost blade or Season 3 Black cleaver = I realized Yomus can really help if you are trying to get that passive in motion. However, extra armor penetration would let this guy get mad strong.




Upon Selection

...summoner.....

Movement
In utter desolation
Life is meant to be massacred
Chaos is the answer to everything
The scent of life will be erased

Attacking
Skulls! Organs! Blood! I want to see them all!
So easy to cut clean
Slaughtering of pigs
Annihilation will be carried out!

Upon using “The Path of Chaos”
DIE! ALL OF YOU!

Taunt
Abandon this battle, or you will never see my blades this far away from your head again.

Joke

I promise you, that I am positive

Death

(Laughs before coughing out a gallon of blood)


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PanickingAttack

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10-23-2012

vabump


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PanickingAttack

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11-18-2012

Finish putting the summary of his lore


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joe42

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11-18-2012

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Originally Posted by PanickingAttack View Post
Odium, the Prophet of Hatred
A guy I was thinking about for a time and now I hope to see what the community would think about him. This would be my 4th champion design and I’ll post the other ones soon.

Role: Tanky dps (Somewhat), Assassin/Diver

Other designs
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=2615551 <------Braxen malgraine
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...d.php?t=904414 <------------ Elrak the prison keeper (Very old, first champ I made)
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=2323582 <------------ Hysterion the Panic Inducer


He plays as an aggressive person in most cases. Although he might not have the burst of a Talon, he has a stun and better health stats. He uses a new mana system called wrath. See the Innate ability for details.


Base Stats
Health: 438 (+87 per level) = 2004
Health Regen: 6.8 per 5 (+ .74 per level) = 20.1 per 5
Mana type: Wrath (Health too when he’s using his W)
Amount of Wrath: 20 + (0.3 Total AD)
Damage: 52 (3.5 per level) = 115
Movement Speed: 325
Armor: 17 (+3 per level)
Magic Resist: 30 (+ 0.8 per level) = 44.4
Attack Speed: .658 (2.77% per level)
Attack range: 125

Bio
Gender: Male
Race: (currently) Unidentified magical being, (formerly) Sancti
Age: 52
Nationality: None
Side: Chaotic (Enemy of all)

Appearance
Size and Body structure: A moderately muscular male shadow figure coming to a life sized shaped. He has eye sockets, a mouth, a nose, and nothing else around the head. Instead of black, he is colored in crimson/maroon. A vortex like scar around the skin where his heart is. His eye sockets are colored in dark/black purple with dried up tears down the eyes to the cheeks (colored the same way). He regenerates a pint of blood every 2 minutes. Height : 6ft 5inch
Equipment: Has armor from the feet to lower chest (does not include gauntlets). The leg armor is like the Japanese samurai plate. Boots and shin guards lean into a more medieval design. It is colored black with gold/brown straps to keep them from falling apart. He has two blades created from the iron and carbon in his blood cells. They were condensed so hard with other minerals to create a metal 20 times harder than titanium. The hilts are made out of the skin of his former human body.

Personality
Hates everything. He sees this as only a world forged by humans. Because of that, anything he sees (animal, alien, plant, ETC) is human related. Believing that the humans created everything in the world, he believes he must purge it. Though he is very irrational due to his history. Actually, he is ****ing nuts now.

Lore (still under construction)
Summary of what the lore is about
- He came from a race known as the Sancti. They had the appearance of humans but their inside body structures were somewhat different. Blood will regenerate alot faster and bones will repair at a fast rate. They were also good at using less destructive magic (Illusion, Teleportation, Healing, and wind magic)
- They isolated themselves from everything in this world with a barrier. The leaders thought it would benefit both the Sancti and the humans to become more open to the world of magic. Without the barrier, the kingdom can be attacked.
- His homeland was under the siege of the void and no one knew who the beasts were or how to defend against them. Odium was only able to fend of a few due to his gift for magic along with a group of mages. Realizing that it was pointless, he ran in fear.
- After 2 months of low rest, little water, and no food, he found himself collapsing near a temple between Noxus and the tempest flats. From there, he woke up tied in the temple. An Aging monk watched him.
- He was used as a blood supply to fuel a young boy (Vladimir) and the monk. Years of having blood ripped out of his skin from the body due to his high blood regeneration. He had lost all hope for humanity. He thought "Humanity would practice such... torture...(Falls unconscious)"
- During those years of hell, he secretly studied their magic arts with more ease because he became immune to the feeling of pain. His body was all ripped and sliced. Months before the ritual between the boy and the monk, he became the entity of anger and lost all reason or sanity.
- The Monk came to do his hourly feed on the prisoner, but something had shock him. The chains were broken but the man was still sitting there. All of his skin was ripped off to create two hilts. He had the appearance of a shadow with the color of crimson.
- He laughs at the monk and tells him, "Did you know that you can make iron 20 times harder than titanium from your own blood? HAHAHAHAHA." He then uses blood magic to rip blood from his own body to create blades for the two hilts. "You humans love to abuse other beings?"
- "Maybe i should not kill you yet. Perhaps I will kill everything else on this planet! You will see hell soon." He dashes out of the temple at the speed of sound. And he slaughtered anything on sight. "Blood magic, torture, invasion, this planet and all its life... IT ALL HAS THE SCENT OF HUMANITY!!!! I WILL DESTROY IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
- he had the highest single killing spree in history. The number of 2,178,291 human lives and 3 species of animals lost in the course of a year. It had stopped when the savage warrior found Ionia. He almost defeated 4 champions of Ionia (Irelia, Master Yi, Lee Sin, Udyr) but lost after Lee Sin kicked him into a wall and Udyr pinned him in Bear stance. He is now imprisoned in the institute of war were he would be used in the league to control his lust of death.

I am bound once more. But at least, I can hurt someone every day (Laughs) - Odium


League judgment
(In progress)

Interviews
Once you hit him, don't stop hitting him. He can be killed, but the wounds he receive won't faze him at all - Master Yi

I never thought i would see a darker heart than my own brothers. I fear him almost as much - Nasus

What ever you do, do not hold back or show him mercy. Because you shall receive none of it - Udyr


Innate: Hostility – Odium gets 15% wrath per auto attack and 20% per skill use (Only if they hit successfully hit) (Q will get 20% if at least one stab hits). For every 3 auto attacks or spells, Odium’s next auto attack will strike twice dealing 60% of his total AD for each and gaining 10% for each of the strikes. One deals physical damage and one deals magical damage. Every time he does this, he gains a “Crimson” stack that only stacks up ONCE. Crimson will be consumed when a skill that deals damage successfully hits an enemy(s). Crimson will increase the damage of the skill by a percentage equal to his current wrath (Q gains increase damage in ALL stabs). All of his wrath points are consumed after use.

Q – Eviscerate
Odium jabs 3 times in a small line for .5 second, dealing physical damage to all enemies in it. Each jab deals bonus damage if any targets are right in front of him during the whole time. The line gains 25% more width per successful hit.
Damage: 25/40/55/70/85 per strike
Damage (when the targets are in front): 30/47/64/81/98 per strike
Bonus AD Ratio per strike: 0.35
Cooldown: 10/9.5/9/8.5/8
Range: 350

W – Iron Skin

Odium sacrifices 20% of his current health to produce iron on the skin. The iron gives armor and magic resist for a period of time. The Iron can also block the next skill/spell that applies CC but reduce the armor and magic resist benefits by half.
Duration: 2.5/2.75/3/3.25 /3.5
Armor and magic resist: 25/30/35/40/45
Cooldown: 19/18/17/16/15

E – Torso Hacker

Odium starts sprinting, increasing his movement speed for 4 seconds. During the time, Odium’s next basic attack will consume the movement speed buff and cause him leap at the target, dealing significant physical damage and stunning the target by 1.25 seconds (This can proc on-hit effects). He stealths while he leaps until he hits the ground.
Base Damage: 70/115/160/205/250
Bonus AD ratio: 0.8
Movement speed increase: 28/32/36/40/44%
Cooldown: 12
Range: 650 (About as much range as Maokai W)

R – The Path to Chaos
Odium shouts in distress, dealing a small amount of magic damage to nearby champions. He becomes the ultimate fighter, gaining stat boosts on attack damage, attack speed, attack range, and life steal for 7 seconds. Crimson will have the benefits of damage increase with only half the wrath price during this period. For example, if he had 100% wrath during this period and uses the crimson stack, the ability that consumes it still gets the intended bonus damage from wrath but only lose 50% of it.
Shout damage: 100/175/250
Bonus AD ratio: 0.6
Attack range increase: 15/30/45
Attack damage increase: 8/10/12%
Attack speed increase: 45/65/85%
Life Steal: 21/28/35%
Cooldown: 90/80/70


Item Suggestions
Merc treads/Ninja tabi = for durability
Blood thirster = Kill thirster
Frozen mallet = hp, damage, slow...
last whisper = Burst damage becomes ridiculous
Guardian angel = Durability / resurrection
Brutalizer - Yomus ghost blade = I realized Yomus can really help if you are trying to get that passive in motion




Upon Selection

(Only breathes in anger)

Movement
All of this is… disgusting
What is it now fool?
Should I even trust your judgment?
I… can’t… stand… these… restraints!
Every command is another pint you’ll lose

Attacking

Bleed and Rot!
I want so see some organs!
I can hear crunching already!
Slaughter

Upon using “The Path of Chaos”
I AM THE EMBODIMENT OF CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!!

Taunt
Your lives are worth abandoning
See my blades? That will be the last time you’ll see it from this distance

Joke

You'll be surprised to know that I'm positive.

Death

(Laughs) I won’t die…Just like war won’t (fallout reference)
i guess you suck. amirite? XD:XX:X:RXXDX)DXDOLX(DOXL


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PanickingAttack

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11-18-2012

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i guess you suck. amirite? XD:XX:X:RXXDX)DXDOLX(DOXL
Huh? Can any explain what he is talking about?


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Chaos Xeloc

Junior Member

11-18-2012

At the very least, this is inspirational towards champion creation. You've truly put in a lot of work towards creating this champion concept. While, although, some parts of it seem a little... cheesy to me, I think it is overall a very good idea for a champion. Kudos, my friend.


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PanickingAttack

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11-18-2012

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Originally Posted by Chaos Xeloc View Post
At the very least, this is inspirational towards champion creation. You've truly put in a lot of work towards creating this champion concept. While, although, some parts of it seem a little... cheesy to me, I think it is overall a very good idea for a champion. Kudos, my friend.
Thank you for your feedback


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Invisibleally

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11-18-2012

So the more frequently he hits, the more damage his abilities do. Interesting.

Also there are 2,178,290 humans going "Dude wtf we didn't do anything to you!"


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PanickingAttack

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11-18-2012

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So the more frequently he hits, the more damage his abilities do. Interesting.

Also there are 2,178,290 humans going "Dude wtf we didn't do anything to you!"
He ape ****. ty for the feeback


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PanickingAttack

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11-20-2012

bump!!!!!


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