Message to demacians (poem)

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Hydarnes

Senior Member

10-18-2012

I know the lore is wrong in some places but I feel it made the story flow.
Hope you like it!

Message to Demacians

Darkness looms over this great city
Dark clouds circle slowly
Tall spires reach towards the sky
The wind whispers lowly

Noxus is the land of sorrows
Where death is all to find
In the streets, darkness reigns
With foes severed skulls, the walls are lined

The beautiful sinister blade
She lurks in the darkness
Preying on enemies
She seems to be heartless

Enemies are ravaged, no mercy
In her deadly death dance
Blades cut and tear demacia’s flesh
Enemies stand no chance

Beautiful in her dance of death
Deadly with her sharp blade
Beautiful on the outside
Inside she is unafraid

Once, Noxus was very beautiful
Laughter traveled the air
Then Demacia's attacks began
Allies seemed not to care

Then on, the happy days were gone
Faded from the suns light
That returns to the land, Noxus
We brave eternal blight

Our hero will save us from you
Beware where all lights fade
Run while you can, she is now near
Fear the sinister blade


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Frost Archer

Senior Member

10-20-2012

The Poem is very good! Have you considered writing in free verse? Then you wouldn't need to worry about adding incorrect facts. But you'll have to excuse me if I stand by Demacia


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Hydarnes

Senior Member

10-20-2012

Quote:
Originally Posted by FrostArcher024 View Post
The Poem is very good! Have you considered writing in free verse? Then you wouldn't need to worry about adding incorrect facts. But you'll have to excuse me if I stand by Demacia
I'm just getting into poetry so I figured I would try with type with set rules (though I broke the syllables part a few times) I've begun expereminting with free verse but I always end up deleting it because I dont like it
I geuss I could be friends with one demacian...