To the Edge of Light's Reach (Lux/Katarina)

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Loso

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08-13-2012

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Originally, I had Lux use a random champion name there, but then I didn't want to give false foreshadowing. So I changed it... without fully changing it ... ROFL

Nononono, please don't feel like a jerk. I WANT you to do this. This is why I created the thread! I want people to tell me their thoughts, what I could improve on, and blahblahblah. I'm tired of things being kept in my head because I know I'll never get better without the help of others. You, friend, supply the help. I want a large serving :P
You want fries with that?


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AerithRayne

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08-13-2012

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You want fries with that?
Only if it comes with bacon and a dash of awesome.


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Loso

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08-13-2012

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only if it comes with bacon and a dash of awesome.
order up!

This forum will not let me type in all caps. Sad day


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AerithRayne

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order up!
You never gave me my receipt, so this is free. *stuffs napkin around the collar of shirt like a bib*


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This forum will not let me type in all caps. Sad day
Awh, how disappointing


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Loso

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08-13-2012

Oh, sorry. *Hands receipt*

That'll be $500.


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AerithRayne

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Oh, sorry. *Hands receipt*

That'll be $500.
Either you're overcharging for these fries and yesterday's bacon or undercharging for edible awesome (which should be patented, by the way). Either way, how about we strike this from my tab and call it even if I promise a lengthy chapter five delivery on Wednesday?


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Loso

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08-13-2012

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Either you're overcharging for these fries and yesterday's bacon or undercharging for edible awesome (which should be patented, by the way). Either way, how about we strike this from my tab and call it even if I promise a lengthy chapter five delivery on Wednesday?
Hmmmm. Deal =D


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AerithRayne

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Hmmmm. Deal =D
Now, to be clear, I said lengthy, not long. It's more than any chapter I've written so far, but don't expect a novel in its place :P


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Loso

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08-13-2012

Deception.

That'll be $499


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AerithRayne

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Deception.

That'll be $499
But... 2200-some words compared to the 1675 of ch. 4. No slack? Nothing?