Transgression of the Radiant Dawn

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Magister Gir

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06-26-2012

I'm still waiting on the next post please do hurry my good sir I wish to know what happens to Leona!


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Dakzu

Senior Member

06-27-2012

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Originally Posted by MiaoLong View Post
Incredible. You certain deserve those bumps sir, I've rarely read anything as good as your first chapter right there. Your sentence direction is spot on, and in particular, the flow of your language was very professional. I rarely did I ever feel like I was reading a fanfic. Don't know why you haven't gotten more replies, (jealously, maybe?) but I'm looking forwards to the conclusion, any other works.
Much appreciated! Extremely kind words. :-)


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Mr Ratz

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06-30-2012

Extremely well written. As mentioned before, it sounds very professional and I cant wait to find out the end of the story. Congratulations sir.

You deserved your Bump.


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Dakzu

Senior Member

07-07-2012

Thanks a lot! Holiday has had me busy, but I'll finish it up soon.


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Dakzu

Senior Member

07-25-2012

Sorry for delays if anyone is still interested, getting married in a few weeks has kept me busy. Hope to update and finish before summer's end.


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Mr Ratz

Senior Member

07-28-2012

Yes, we are still interested. So here I am bumping this.
It is an incredible short story about my favorite Champ (Leona <3), and I hope it get's finished.

Congratulations! Hope you have a great wedding and that you live a long happy life with your spouse (Husband?Wife? **** english language doesn't give genders away :S).


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Dakzu

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09-07-2012

Thanks for the Congratulations! I found some unexpected time this morning, so I decided to finish off my little short story. I hope anyone who bothers to read it likes it!


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Dakzu

Senior Member

09-12-2012

Shameful, self-serving bump


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Dakzu

Senior Member

09-19-2012

^


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Ark Angel HFB

Senior Member

09-19-2012

It is solid... not the greatest but certainly in the pretty good area...

It is nice to see a story that moves decently and the champs seem to be in line with how they might act...

All and all.. I enjoyed it. Good job... write more...

in fact I challenge you to write a that centers on MF and Garen in some way...