On a side note.
Please check out my other threads. http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...ght=jacqueline [A Suggestion for Riot] has some map ideas and http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...ght=jacqueline is for my other champion.
Looking for some feedback and some discussion about these topics! And for Amadeus as well. He would probably like some lovin'.
yo, first up. the passive needs work!
Innate: okay, so its a great passive but i see something conflicting...
bonus ap = bonus armor, check i guess you wanted it to be vice versa instead of bonus mr :P
bonus ad = bonus mr, check, same as above.
bonus armor = bonus hp.... this is whats pushing the passive into "OP", it causes the bonus ap to be even more useful, and if you stop it from doing so it doesnt become as useful. also, ap/ad buffing armor/mr makes sense, you would need something other than armor to add hp, and thats still op, i suggest leaving it without the bonus armor = bonus hp part
Q: i am loving this skill, such a neat idea going with the mechanics of darius's spin! getting caught causes a stun so unique !
although the whole zeal and holy spark makes it WAY more confusing than it needs to be. try and simplify this skill, its already an amazing skill the way it is.
the whole passive part could be removed and itd be way simpler. maybe rework that part
W: nice skill, change the scaling on blind to like 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2
also, what is guiding hand or repetence, you dont explain the other half of the skill
E: i dont really understand e, it doesnt make much sense, once again you have two skill names but no explanation on which one is active/passive, or is it used twice like lee, etc.
R: is awesome, just add a duration that hes "immune" for, other than that its all good!
now gotta review some of your other champs :P
Here's what I did:
Took out the armor to health conversion in the passive.
Yes, wanted it to be vice versa. I want him to be able to run in and not be picked off from afar or stay back and not worry about his face being kicked in up close.
Alrighty, I’ll have to explain his set up here. The left ability name is for allies, the right is for enemies. The only exception is his ultimate which is a double click ability.
Zeal is set up to be the support ability within the mechanisms of his Q. After building it up to full stacks using Q will also cause a burst heal to his allies if it strikes an enemy. Doing so will also knock the enemy back. Of course, it stated that above. Uh, what’s confusing about it? O.o
Again, for the E, it’s the same ability but affects targets differently. This is similar to Lulu’s skills.
Added an 8 second lasting time for his R before needing to cast Godsend or have it go on cool down.
Thanks for poking at Amadeus. Anything else, please let me know.
Okay, I think I'll come back to check up on your abilities in detail but for now I absolutely must comment on your champion's quotes.
You chose right, summoner. This is good. (This to me seems quite neutral and I don't believe it really shows any of his flavor or his reason for joining the League of Legends. I'm not saying it conflicts with his character, but I don't feel it does him much justice.)
As you command, Summoner. (This is good, they can't all be super flavorful. Simple and true.)
Light the way. (More in favor of flavor, good.)
Godsend, guide me. (Yes, I like )
[Annoyed] Yes, yes, on my way. (Reminds me of the Footman from Warcraft 3, and doesn't really sound like a High Lord.)
It’s hammer time! (Again, I've heard this in Warcraft 3, Uther says this. The intention was also the same. Gotta love MC Hammer. However with this, it's quite fitting, and original for LoL but will it be seen as MC Hammer's line, or Uther the Lightbringer's line?)
Prepare to be purged! (Not bad, simple and true.)
Judgment comes. (Quite good, shows that he fathered Kayle well. I just wonder if it can be emphasized more that Amadeus is the "judgement"? I'm thinking maybe it can show an individual flavor like Poppy's "hammer-justice" without being seen as a ripoff.)
The time to repent is nigh. (I'd agree with this every time I heard him say it, it's perfect!)
I’ll…be…back… (No, no, no! He's not terminator, and yes, I say this with opinionated emphasis: I don't want him to be terminator! At the very end of his lore he has the perfect inspiration for something impactful. For example, "My legacy... it won't end this way!")
The light at the end of the tunnel? That would be your doom. (You put a smile on my face here. This demonstrates creativity and represents his character fully in my opinion.)
This little Light of mine…I’m going to let it shine. (lmao. 'Nuff said.)
You call that a Flash? (Hmm. This feels like a taunt, like a taunt aimed at Flash. As Amadeus has no Flash-like abilities it isn't strengthening his character. I feel like it isn't... making light of the situation...)
In general I think that you might have missed something I deem quite important - Amadeus has lived for thousands of years, he's immortal. His style of speech could range from ancient to modern and you could really play with that. I'm not saying you haven't, cause I don't know, but if you haven't then I'm hoping this might be helpful or inspirational for any further improvement on Amadeus.
While I wrote this, I skimmed over his abilities individually, and I say he's got a good sense of tankiness. He would make the enemy team want to target him, much like how Sona does, but minus the frailty of Sona.
As Amadeus would say it he would be implementing that the summoner made a good choice...as in, not an evil one. I'll change it if you still feel it to be unfitting.
Close! Actually. The third one I took from Garithos the Overlord or whatever his title was. He says it like he's speaking to an advisor who is nagging him about schedules.
Wasn't Uther, it was Muradin and his dwarven accent. xP MC Hammer's line, most likely. Besides a very select group of fans not everyone remembers WCIII as in depth to make that connection. :[
I like where your mind is. I think the suggested line is far better and should be implemented immediately!
His second one implies his light based abilities. Closer to a flashier Jayce over a Lux. It's yellow, bright....and flashy. You are right, it does seem more of taunt but look at as a elder who making snide but amusing remark only meant for a cheap 'Haha!'.
Yeah. I tried that once and wound up with the selection we have here. xD If you have anything else to add for the range between ancient and modern please spitball them at me....without the spitballs. And yep, he's supposed to be a tanky dps that can convert to a true tank if need be.
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