{Champion Concept} Polaris, The Evening Star (Review Exchange)

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Moorningstar

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06-01-2012

sooooo luna from dota


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Lyria Eternal

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06-01-2012

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Lyria Eternal

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06-01-2012

@Moorningstar: There are some similarities, but my design has to do with the saying; For the Sun, Moon, and Stars.


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Lyria Eternal

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06-01-2012

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Edasich

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06-01-2012

I was going to ask how Polaris shifts between his moon and sun phases, but then I read the footnotes. Overall, you have a very promising concept, but the overall writing feels a bit too shoddy to fully understand. You may wish to consult the LoL Wiki to get a better idea of how to format this concept. I'd also like to see a few quotes or something.


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Lyria Eternal

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06-01-2012

Explain what you mean by "quotes"?

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I'm putting in the level values tomorrow.


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Lyria Eternal

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06-02-2012

Updated.

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Donnylicious

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06-02-2012

seems a bit way op. The moon glaive seems similar to the old Sivir which they took out because too op. Seems like he has way too much slows, stuns and blinds lol Nice idea tho


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Lyria Eternal

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06-02-2012

There is:

1 micro stun (.5 seconds) from his ulti.

1 micro fear (.5 seconds), or 1 blind (2.5 second max) from Q

10% slow from basic attacks (Which can hit 5 people with E), or a every third hit blind (With a every 5th attack doing 65% [max] ad with a 1% [max 6%] of max health burn with E).

1 30% slow, or MR reduction (max of 25 points) from W.

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A low slow. A low MR reduction. Low HP burn. A root. A micro fear. A micro Stun.

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^ Sorry but I don't see this as being OP. Since he has only blinds and a life burn in one mode, and a slow, and a micro fear and stun in the other.

Please explain if you believe otherwise.


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gildar

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06-03-2012

Sometime that micro second could cost either the game or fight and you have a lot to mess with people. With proper preparation you could maximize the damage and CC which in turn will mess up the opponent team. I for one support this champion of sun and moon.


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