Chogathy(Jabberwocky)

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Deimus144

Senior Member

04-13-2012

'British ascent'
Hello, this is Deimus144 with this little poem remake of the poem Jabberwocky by Lewis carol.
Note: The Bold part is the edited part.


Chogathy

It was brillin and Malcom Graves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe
all mismy was twisted fate
and talon was outraged

"Beware the Chogath my Shen
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the terror of the void and shun
the blue golems camp."

He took his vorpal sword in hand
long time the manxxome foe he sought
so rested he by the baron tree
and stood awhile in thought.

And in ufish thought he stood
The Chogath with eyes of flame
came whiffing through the jungle
and Nomnomed as it came!

Ki strike, Ki strike! and feint and feint!
The vorpal blade went snicker snack!
He left it dead and with its head
He went Shadow dashing back.

And when he came too
His comrades were revived
Graves with a broken back
twisted fate with burned cards
and talon was going to rage


Then akali said:
"A has though slain the chogath!?
I am coming to your arms my beamish love
Oh frabjous day! Callo callay!"
She shouted in her joy.


[I]It was brillin and Malcom Graves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe
all mismy was twisted fate
and talon was outraged


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HMCat

Senior Member

04-14-2012

Haha, brilliant.


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Deimus144

Senior Member

04-16-2012

self bump.


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Astraltar

Senior Member

04-17-2012

Good sir, you are indeed a master of exquisite poetry.


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Cerubois

Senior Member

04-18-2012

The Jabberwocky is one of my favourite poems, and you've done it great justice.
Shen was my first main, until he fell into nerfblivion (and I still haven't had the motivation to go back to him since his buff), and the 'vorpal' always reminded me of the poem. I'm glad you did this.


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Deimus144

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04-18-2012

Quote:
Originally Posted by Cerubois View Post
The Jabberwocky is one of my favourite poems, and you've done it great justice.
Shen was my first main, until he fell into nerfblivion (and I still haven't had th motivation to go back to him since his buff), and the 'vorpal' always reminded me of the poem. I'm glad you did this. :)
There is more where that poem came from.


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theshim

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04-19-2012

and talon is ALWAYS outraged

Well done!


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Lulúi

Senior Member

04-20-2012

It's good, but aren't you spelling 'accent' wrong in all your posts?


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Deimus144

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04-21-2012

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lulúi View Post
It's good, but aren't you spelling 'accent' wrong in all
your posts?
Oh no.........


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Deimus144

Senior Member

04-24-2012

Hey should I put this in the summoner showcase?


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