Heart Set Ablaze

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Isry98

Junior Member

04-07-2014

This is the tale of Brand the Burning Vengeance and how he met his true love.

The insolent fools don't understand me.
Once an ordinary man forced to live as a slave to this creature.
His only desire is to watch the world burn.
I am powerless to stop him.
He owns me.
Yet the other champions believe me to have a choice in the matter.
They can not comprehend the torture I endure on a daily basis.
My body is subject to this sadistic ruler.
They have outcasted me.
They have begun to fuel the passion of vengeance set in my soul.
My heart longs for freedom, for acceptance.
My mind is becoming increasingly like his.
I am begging to understand the creature.
That thought frightens me to the core.
I can't hold on for much longer.
He is starting to consume me.
I fear Kegan Rhode will be no more.


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Isry98

Junior Member

04-08-2014

The strangest thing happened to me today.
As I was being summoned for a match.
I got to the middle lane.
There stood someone I had never seen before.
She levitated above the ground.
Her clothing was purple.
Her eyes glowed.
She was the most beautiful creature I had ever seen.
I felt Kegan Rhode comeing back as I looked at her.
Suddenly I had control of Brand.
Then the match ended and everything returned to normal.
I must find this girl.
Find out her story.
Inside of me for the first time.
My heart is ablaze.


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Isry98

Junior Member

04-08-2014

I found her in the Institute of War.
During her recess from matches I approached her.
"Hello I'm Brand" I muttered.
Unsure of what to say.
She said in return "Hello" in an uneasy tone.
I told her that I had been in a match with her earlier.
She seemed to remember me.
"Oh yes I remember you" she responded.
"Well I just wanted to say good match" I said cautiously.
"Yes good match to you as well" she replied.
I was at a loss for words to say next.
Finally with great reluctance I said "Your beautiful."
She was taken back by this.
"What?" she questioned.
"Your beautiful" I repeated.
"No one has ever told me that before" she said shocked.
"Really?" I replied
"Yes they say I'm powerful, uncontrollable, but never beautiful" she said with for the first time care.
"I understand how it feels to be an outcast" I told her.
She said, "I am always considered a threat, no one will ever talk to me."
Then I realized my next match was about to que.
"I need to go to a match" I announced.
"First I must know your name" I expressed.
"Syndra" she replied.
"Well" I said, "Goodbye Syndra hopefully we will meet again."
"Goodbye Brand" she communicated.

Please don't forget to leave feedback and tell me what you think.
I am also open to suggestions. -Isry98


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Loperixie

Senior Member

04-09-2014

Despite this story being a Champion X Champion fanfic, like umpteen dozen others out there (all of which are good, except for that one abysmal piece called The Secret Admirer, so awful!), I'm hooked. I like the way this story is structured.


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Isry98

Junior Member

04-10-2014

I haven't seen her for days.
Brand has started to take control again.
I must find her!
I can't continue to live like this.
Day and night he tortures me.
Puts thoughts in to my head of destruction.
The world burning.
The worst part is I am the one burning the world.
My heart is torn.
My mind is shattered.
My very existence is being trampled on and destroyed.
I don't know who I am anymore.
NOOOO!!!!!NOOOOOO!!!!!
He is taking over!
HELP!!!!!!!!!!

"Silence Rhode, your mine now!"