Cataclysm of the Dragonborn [[J4xShy Story]]

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Ryugi Kazamaru

Senior Member

02-20-2012

Very cute. I love how Jarvan disarms her so well. The secret to that true "aww" moment is making even the thickest-skinned seem vulnerable and human for that split second.

You, sir, do that with flying colors in this so far, and I can't wait to read more. Good show.


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xMsyk

Senior Member

02-21-2012

Ironscale Shyvana depiction. Great choice!

Saved in my favorites, will drop by here and there to read the next parts.


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Sebastianthefrog

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02-21-2012

Bamp for epicosity. to lazy to write a review, can I just say its great?


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SethMayer

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02-21-2012

Really awesome, can't wait to see more!


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XkomuroX

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02-22-2012

awesome work im hoping to read the next chapter


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Warscythes

Senior Member

02-22-2012

I enjoyed it.

From what I can tell so far it is a nice little background story, the setting and story is progressing at a nice pace with few "fluffs". The story feels fairly standard and I believe you did a great job of making the mundane into something special.

I hope you will write more.


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Tatsuha

Junior Member

02-23-2012

"Luxanna Crownguard had once told him that he was thicker than average."
LOL


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Valkyrie Lead

Senior Member

02-24-2012

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tatsuha View Post
"Luxanna Crownguard had once told him that he was thicker than average."
LOL
Glad someone caught that xD


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aarcade

Senior Member

02-25-2012

I really enjoyed reading this especially because im a huge fan of j4. Cant wait for part 3! Great stuff


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Admidus

Member

03-11-2012

wow i really like this!
very nice story!!
cant wait for part 3 !! =)
nice job!