Love the idea and the ult name. I'm a little concerned on the ad scaling of the minions, all five of them for the first 10 seconds would total to 50ad and 50% of quixar's ad, but for the last 5 seconds they'd total to 100ad and 100% of quixar's ad, and a reasonable attack speed to boot. Spin Web sounds amazingly entertaining, and I get the feeling the test of a good quixar would be knowing when and where to place their web.
All said and done I'd love to play the champ, and the quotes are awesome as well.
Sounds like it could be a really good champ, man. If Riot even looks in this board, they should totally consider your champ. But I do have to agree with Ippots, the scaling on the minions seems a bit too high, since they'll be coming out in greater numbers than just a voidling or Yorick's ghosties (the ghosts do more damage as most of them do other effects(slow, lifesteal, etc)). Maybe a cooldown of 30 for spin the web, as she DOES gain terrainwalk from it, which may or may not be a bit strong. Perhaps change it to something like Caitlyn's 50 Caliber Net?
I really like the idea!
I do have a couple of suggestions and concerns that can be taken or left
1. Her "W" should be one of two things. Either, 1. be a slow-into-stun in which pursuing champs are stunned after being on the web for a longer duration. Or, 2. allow for the increased maneuverability that you are currently thinking about.
2. Her ult should give a little more oomph as it doesn't sound like she'll be getting a whole lot out of it. Perhaps if she kills an enemy champ while it is active, she is given the option to "consume" that champ (being invulnerable while doing so) and restore a proportion of her health in relation to how much damage she did to that champ.
3. I agree with the statement of her minions being a little strong, but that is something that can be worked with a bit.
The general stats look good, but I do think it would be nice to give her base movement a small boost (after all, she is a spider).
Other than that, I see her as a well thought out champ and I hope to see her go live!
I think the idea of the minions is that they are the main source of the damage.
When I was reading this I was imagining amazing ganks with w, with quixar popping out of the jungle from literally any wall, just as a spider should. Sounds like a skarmer-esque champ that works best when whittling down the opponent in a chase rather than bursting them down.
The idea of a spider crawling in "over" the trees behind your turret, ulting, then crawling back to the jungle's safety is absolutely terrifying. Good job.
PS. This world will burn? I'm pretty sure that's what brand says.
Also: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bdnYMW-ZP0k hahahaha
Okay a very well thought out champion. Very Interesting and unique(because does most damage with minions).
I will like to point out that the minion ratio is a little too high and i suggest nerfing it because is she has 5 minions out she will be able to dominate a team fight.
(Q-Spell) Blinding Bite : I like this alot. I looked around and it is balanced. Unique and original but its like combining teemo and soraka and making it an attack damage spell. It works really well. Plus since it is a Auto-Attack modifier, i do not think it works well with a tank. I suggest making it a target spell to help with Crowd Control.
(W-Spell) Spin Web : I suggest decreasing the mana cost this is way too high to be a non-ultimate. Decrease this alot because if she does not have this in team fights she will not keep anyone alive. But overall its good.
(E-Spell) Web Shot : This cooldown is way too low. It needs to increase. and decrease the release timer, it isnt a damaging spell so it shouldn't be like Sion's shield(which does damage after 10 seconds of it being active, But 6 seconds until you can press it again).
(R-Spell) Fear the Mind : This is a really good Ultimate. Very original. has never been done before. I suggest having the duration of the fear go like this 0.5/1/1.5 so you have the upper hand late game.
ALL IS BALANCED AND OK!
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