[CHAMPION CONCEPT]: Mauro, the Dragonknight

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TheMightyChoctaw

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08-28-2011

Blackhand, the Dragonknight

Concept/Appearance A melee fighter with powerful fire-based abilities. He wears a suit of dark red, almost black, armor and fights with guantlets that look like the open mouths of dragons. He has short black hair and orange eyes.
He is NOT a mage, but a melee fighter that uses magic to augment his natural

Lore
Born into a humble agricultural village on the outskirts of Demacia, Mauro was destined for the hard life of a farmer. The moment he learned to walk his life of toil began, as he performed the countless chores and tasks required to feed the Demacian military and citizenry. He hated every second of it. His rage reached its pinnacle on his eleventh birthday, when a parade of Demacian knights passed through his village and sought comfort at the inn. They demanded food, drink, and entertainment, and all of the attention and celebration that would have been Mauro's went to the knights instead.
In his anger Mauro awoke a long-hidden talent, the ability to manipulate fire. The ability was beyond his control, however, and the entirety of the village's crops were burned to ashes.
Mauro's parents and fellow visitors were outraged when they discovered he was the source of the firestorm, citing his burned, blackened palms to a Demacian judge as evidence of his crimes. They of course had little knowledge of Mauro's magical abilities, but he was exiled all the same.
Enraged by the injustice of the ruling, Mauro ventured to Noxus, adopting the title "Blackhand" and determined to hone his abilities and turn them against the nation that had betrayed him.

"Whoever thinks that vengeance is best served cold has never met the Blackhand." -Swain

Burned Palms (Innate)
Mauro's auto attacks deal an additional 25% of his ability power as magic damage.
(Fiery particles are seen every time he lands an auto-attack.)

Dragonstrike (Q)
Mauro sends out a pillar of flame in front of him, damaging everyone caught in the blast. The fire blast deals 50/100/150/200/250 (+0.5 AP) magic damage to all enemies.
Ability Type: Skill Shot
Ability Cost: 75 Mana (All ranks)
Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 seconds
Range:10000

Fiery Temper (W)
Mauro's anger manifests as flames, engulfing everything around him. Enemies standing near Mauro take 30/35/40/45/50 (+0.35 AP) magic damage per second.
Ability Type: Toggled
Ability Cost: 20 Mana per second
Cooldown: 5 seconds (After deactivation)
Range: Personal

Firestorm (E)
Mauro spins, spewing flames from both gauntlets, engulfing everything around him in flames. Enemies in range take 80/125/170/215/260 (+0.5 AP) magic damage.
Ability Type: Channelled (1 second channel)
Ability Cost: 70/80/90/100/110 Mana
Cooldown: 15 seconds (All ranks)
Range: 700

Funeral Pyre (R)
Upon death, Mauro goes into stasis, becoming untargettable. After 2 seconds, he is reborn in a collumn of flames that deal damage to enemies around his corpse.
Mauro is reborn with 25/50/75% of his maximum health and mana and all cooldowns reset, and the explosion deals 150/250/350 (+0.75 AP) magic damage to all nearby enemies.
Ability Type: Passive/Auto-cast
Ability Cost: None
Cooldown: 4 minutes (regardless of cooldown reduction)
Range: 700


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TheMightyChoctaw

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08-28-2011

Please keep in mind that numbers and ratios can be changed. It's the abilities themselves that I want critiqued. And please say something if you view it. I don't care if it's just a thumbs up or legit review or a string of blistering insults about my intelligence and/or sexuality. Just leave something, haha.


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Void22

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09-05-2011

for dragon strike 10000 range is massive might want to fix that


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purewolfgang

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09-05-2011

lol yea he kinda seems a bit OP even if you fix the range of his abilitys/AP ratios i mean having a auto cast ult that restores a % of Hp and mana is a little broken along with the 10000 range on his Q...