[Champion Concept] Aduro, The Consumer of Mana.

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ProfessorTokes

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04-17-2011

Notes: Thought the league could use some spicing up. So i thought of Aduro! He's still needs a bit of work but i think for a first run that he's alright. I always liked character creation and if people like Aduro i'll post another champion that i have posted before in other locations , Yami. Aduro would be a sort of new spin on things , A champion unique to the league. All feedback is accepted and i attempted to make him as balanced as possible in the first run but i know he is not perfect. He's a Support champion with the ability to nuke with his ultimate spell. His summon is really just to give him a bit more ability to push. All his abilities would scale like ryzes from mana %.

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Lore:

The last day Aduro could remember was the day that he fell into a whirlpool off the shore of his homeland in the shadow isle.
Before long Aduro was consumed in the life force that is mana , finding himself stuck in a section of the void where all the mana in the world gathers.
The mana burned the skin of Aduro completely melting down and recomposing him body constantly , a million times a moment. After just minutes
Aduro found himself forgetting his past , Remembering what was only important to him at the time , His control of magic. After days of this
physical break down he then started to take in the mana around him , Learning to twist and manipulate the substance, For something more then
just a casual spell. Aduro forged his own renewed body out of this pure life force. After a month of this , Aduros control of mana grew to
the point where this area of the void became apart of him. He then took in all of the mana to complete his body. Now entering the main body
Of the void Aduro tested his ability on the creatures that layed within. Starting with insects he learned to drain out their mana and fuel them with his own.
Once this was second nature he moved on to larger creatures, Voidlings. Aduro learned to speak with the voidlings but swapping mana with them.
Being familuar with all the creatures of the void , Aduro grew curious about how to return to his home of Shadow isle. Then one day after
receiving a report of random portals openning up and voidlings disappering, He himself went out to investigate. He stumbled apon a portal
Entering it without a second thought Aduro found himself within the field of justice in the middle of battle. Stunned Aduro looked around and
saw Malzahar. Malzahar looked like a being of the void so Aduro quickly rushed to him ; Sharing some of his mana and taking some of Malz'.
They had a short conversation , Malz informed Aduro where he was , What he was in and the glory and honor in being in the League. Aduro
hid on the field of justice till this battle was over , As the champions returned to the league , Malz escorted Aduro to the leader of the league.
Intrested in finding out who he was and wanting to thank Malzahar for his kindness , Aduro joined the league , Becoming one of the Void brotherhood
In the ranks of Malzahar and Kassadin. " You call that a spell ? Why dont i teach you something about Mana. " - Aduro


Skills:

Passive: ( Name goes here ) - Global mana Regen buff, Like viegars passive but maybe half since its a global effect.

Q- Combustion - Passive: Aduro burns 3/5/7/9/11 on hit.
Active: Based on the current % of the enemys mana Aduro can stun or slow.
Level 1: 35% or lower stunning for 1.25 seconds. 36% and up slowing 15% for 1.15 seconds.
Level 2: 35% or lower stunning for 1.45 seconds. 36% and up slowing 15% for 1.35 seconds.
Level 3: 35% or lower stunning for 1.65 seconds. 36% and up slowing 20% for 1.65 seconds.
Level 4: 35% or lower stunning for 1.85 seconds. 36% and up slowing 20% for 1.95 seconds.
Level 5: 35% or lower stunning for 2.05 seconds. 36% and up slowing 25% for 2.25 seconds.
12 second CD on the active at all levels

W - Siphon - Aduro has learned to channel his mana to the point where he can take it into his body and expell it from and into all the living things around him.

Passive: Aduro can heal half the mana that he burns.

Active: Level 1 - Aduro drains 2 mana per second or funnels 3 mana per second. 10 cd seconds
Level 2 - Aduro drains 3.5 mana per second or funnels 5 mana per second 10 cd
Level 3 - Aduro drains 5 mana per second or funnels 7 mana per second 10 cd
Level 4 - Aduro drains 6.5 mana per second or funnels 9 per second 10 cd
Level 5 - Aduro drains 8 mana per second or funnels 11 per second. 10 cd
The Drain/Funnel lasts up to 5 seconds.


E -Summon Edo- Aduro having spent much time in the void learned to harness the power of voidlings and empower them with his own essense giving him partial control of the new found beast.
Level 1 - Edo has 200 hp and 100 mana. 11 mana drained a second. 9 Mana expelled on hit. 25 second CD
Level 2 - Edo has 300 hp and 200 mana. 9 mana drained a second. 7 mana expelled on hit. 22 second cd
Level 3 - Edo has 400 hp and 300 mana. 7 mana drained a second. 5 mana expelled on hit. 19 second cd
Level 4 - Edo has 500 hp and 400 mana. 5 mana drained a second. 3 mana expelled on hit. 15 second cd
Level 5 - Edo has 650 Hp and 525 mana. 3 mana drained a second. 1 mana expelled on hit. 10 second cd

Edo stats - Damage 40 + 7 per skill level , Armor/mRes 20 + 5 per skill level , Attack speed .6 + .12 per skill level. Only 1 can be up at a time.

R- Mastery Of Mana - Aduro has true control over mana even able to compress his mana rapidly and expand it out of his body causing a fierce explosion.
Passive - On kill Aduro absorbs the targets mana permanitly. Minion 1/3/5 ; Champion 4/7/10
Active- Level 1 - Consumes all mana dealing 1/6th of total mana as magic damage
Level 2 - consumes all mana dealing 1/4th of total mana as Magic damage
Level 3 - consumes all mana dealing 1/3 of total mana as magic damage
CD starts at 150 , Decreasing by 25 per level.

Joke : " I pity the fool who still uses energy! Go blue or go home! "
Taunt : " Is it just me or are you having mana problems ? "

Movement phrase: " I can feel the presence of mana " , " For the void "

Attack phrase: " I'll consume more then just your mana " , " You have no control over your spells "

Death phrase: " It seems I was the one without mana.. "


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berzerk dragon

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04-17-2011

Hate to say it, but your champion has a flawed design. It's broken in two ways:
1. Mana burn (especially in the amounts you're suggesting) is immensely anti-fun. Not being able to cast spells is not cool, doubly so if it isn't even your fault.
2. This champion is 85% useless against manaless champions. I think this statement speaks for itself.


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ProfessorTokes

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Originally Posted by berzerk dragon View Post
Hate to say it, but your champion has a flawed design. It's broken in two ways:
1. Mana burn (especially in the amounts you're suggesting) is immensely anti-fun. Not being able to cast spells is not cool, doubly so if it isn't even your fault.
2. This champion is 85% useless against manaless champions. I think this statement speaks for itself.
1. Originally it was 1/3/5/7/9 if you want me to put it back. And he'd melee so it isn't broken. Supports have low hp so early game you wouldn't be running up just to him him and burn 3 low amounts of mana.
2. The whole useless against manaless champions is on purpose. Everything has to have a counter right ? So he cant burn their mana , But he can support his lane mate and use his summon to push.


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I am Bobicus

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04-17-2011

um manaless champs? how would he work with that?


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ProfessorTokes

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Originally Posted by RockinxRobster View Post
um manaless champs? how would he work with that?
His summon, Ulti and supporting his lanemate. He's a support champion. Not a champ killer or tank like the others from the void.