A product of boredom. Adramedelech- Of The Dammed

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Auroros Osprey

Senior Member

02-21-2010

So i got bored one night while i messed around on the net and came up with this guy. Maybe you'll like him, maybe you'll hate him, maybe it will inspire you, who knows. tell me what you think. also i cant type D-A-M-Ned so i had to spell it dammed

STORY--------



Several years prior to the creation of the League of Legends, the war
between Noxus and Demacia was a seemingly endless, blood soaked
and brutal battle, their conflict almost never ceasing. During this
time many critical locations in both cities were attacked and
sometimes destroyed out right. Other such places, such as a vital
Demacian resource town of Dallcoa, suffered worse fates. Many of its
skilled workers were enslaved and the war ready equipment was
plundered, but the fate of one man, a simple farmer no less, would
come to haunt the Noxian General for is unnatural life.

Borit Zalis, this very farmer, was imprisoned within the twisting
labyrinths under Noxus after he was learned to be of no particular use
to the Noxian army. Spending several months in an attempt to free
himself, he was soon turned into personal whipping boy to General
Darkwill, whom found Borit's defiant nature amusing to no end.

It seemed like eternity passed as Borit was subjected to Darkwill's
fiendish whims, torturing and humiliating the man whenever the
General had a spare moment. And though defiant, Borit was still only
human, his sanity waning and desperation growing to the point
suicide would be his only salvation. His blind rage
grew ever more, rage that the very man responsible for not only his
own captivity but that of countless others of his home and the leader
of the enemey his city so longed to destroy. All his frustration and
pain came to a head one day, and Borit decided to act.

Learning some of the evil magics holding Darkwill's life in the mortal
realm, Borit smuggled many of the dark necromantic tomes he found
strewn about the building he resided in, whenever he had a moment
to flee from his tortures and did what no sane man would truly
consider. Borit sold his soul to the devil's king, the fearsome Larcruis.
In return for guaranteeing his place in the fires of the underworld,
Borit was given demonic powers that over flowed from his being, the
ground bursting into flame at his touch. With his new found power,
Borit slew a wake of destruction through Noxus, decimating all who
stood in his path until he confronted General Darkwill in his chamber.

The General however was not intimidated, but rather delighted and
battled Borit in a clash of unholy magic. The battle was short lived
however as Darkwill soon grew bored much to Borit's anger and told
his former slave this was all merely a game to him. Enraged, Borit
charged Darkwill....only to find himself locked in place by a powerful
binding spell, made to slay infernal beings. Darkwill told Borit he
knew his plan the whole time, simply leading him by the nose to his
own destruction and with a smile, cast Borit into the pits of the
underworld where in his current state, he would burn in agony for all
time.

Indeed Borit spent many years in his scorching hellscape, demons of
all kinds toying with his conscience and putting him through
unspeakable pain. Several years later though, Borit was able to
speak with the devil king Larcruis, the one whom held his soul captive.
Borit made yet another bargain with the great demon, vowing he
would serve him for eternity if he could be granted a second chance
to kill Darkwill. Larcruis agreed to bring Broit to the mortal relm,
delighted that he may soon hold Darkwill's soul as well. However the
devil king did restore Borit to mortal realm, he was not alive. His body
was nothing more than his skeleton, his bones charred black and
small patches of charred flesh, barely clinging to him. And worst of
all, his pain did not cease.

Borit at first tried in vain to ease his suffering, but his flaming torment
persisted no matter what he tried. Larcruis told him though, as long as
his goal was unfulfilled, his torture would not cease. But the devil
king did show mercy, providing his new servant with appropriate
equipment born of hellfire as well as greater powers of the dammed,
to slay all who denied him his goal

Now no longer human, Borit was a burning wraith, a spirit of un
ending pain and seething with hate and revenge. Deciding that his
humanity would only hinder him now, he abandoned his human
name and took the demon title Adramedelech, of the
dammed, vowing he would never rest until he torn Darkwill's beating
heart from his chest and dragged his soul to the underworld himself.
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sounds like hes kinda mad, doesn't it? XD now for his stats and powers. they're probably over powered but that's why I'm posting. that way everyone can help me make him more balanced.

Stats----
currently approximate. feel free to make suggestions, help is always welcomed.

Health: 380 +80 per level

Mana: 260 +50 per level

Speed: 320

Armor: 11 + 3 per level

Magic Resist: 40 + 1 per level

Health regen: .5 + .10 per level

Mana regen: .9 + .1 per level


Passive: Abatement.Upon death, allies are granted a 25% attack speed bonus for the duration of your death.
If revived with the Revive spell, you gain the Endless Torment buff,
increasing movement speed by 40% for one minute.

Abilty 1: Empathatic Suffering. Causes the targeted champion to feel your
endless torment, reducing their HP by the same amount you have lost. Effect persists untill deactivated or you are slain. When deactivated the target will regain the HP lost from the attack over 5 seconds. HP drained is only drained by the initial activation and does not increase as you take damage while active. Drains mana per second while linked. Mana cost is reduced with each ability rank. 60 second cooldown. Costs 100/90/80/70/60 mana. This attack cannot kill.

Ability 2: Soul Consuming Flame. Attack an enemy with a large fire ball dealing 90/130/180/220/270 magic damage. Champions struck will have all their stats reduced by 1% for 1 minute. Reduction will stack 5 times. Damage increases with ability power and stat reduction increases by 1% each ability rank. 10 second cooldown.Maximum reduction 5%

Ability 3: Demonic Inferno.
Erupts magma from the underworld, causeing 120/180/240/300/360 magic AOE damage and causing 60/90/120/150/180 magic damage per second to enemies who walk through the lingering magma. Damage increases with ability power. 28 second cooldown.

Ultimate Ability: Reprisal Stare :
Deals 100/150/200 damage times how many champion kills the target has made. The multiply effect "uses" their kills and will not multiply after they have been hit once. the target will have to kill more champions for the attack to multiply again. Assists are used if the target has not killed any champions. assists multiply damage by half their amount.120 second cooldown

Sound fun? sound weak? Sound too godly? let me know.

i see Adramedelech as something like this http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs27/f/20...r_by_Deems.jpg


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Motas

Senior Member

02-26-2010

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fierce Deity Fox View Post
Passive: Abatement.Upon death, allies are granted a 25% attack speed bonus for the duration of your death.
If revived with the Revive spell, you gain the Endless Torment buff,
increasing movement speed by 40% for one minute.
wow, this is a really cool passive, you've revolved it around the concept of your own death, so this is truly a really cool idea, I love it =)

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fierce Deity Fox View Post
Abilty 1: Empathatic Suffering. Causes the targeted champion to feel your
endless torment, reducing their HP by the same amount you have lost. Effect persists untill deactivated or you are slain. When deactivated the target will regain the HP lost from the attack. HP drained is only drained by the initial activation and does not increase as you take damage while active. Drains100/90/80 mana per second while linked. Mana cost is reduced with each ability rank. 60 second cooldown. This attack cannot kill.
Don't have it so that they immediately get all of their hp back, have it so that it returns to them over maybe 5 seconds, so that its not a waste if it fails

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fierce Deity Fox View Post
Ability 2: Soul Consuming Flame. Attack an enemy with a large fire ball dealing 90/130/180/220/270 magic damage. Champions struck will have all their stats reduced by 1% for 1 minute. Reduction will stack 5 times. Damage increases with ability power and stat reduction increases by 1% each ability rank. 10 second cooldown.
So you could potentially debuff the hero for 5% of their stats, that doesn't seem like a lot so I don't have a no problems with this ability

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fierce Deity Fox View Post
Ability 3: Demonic Inferno. Erupts magma from the underworld, causeing 120/180/240/300/360 magic AOE damage and causing 60/90/120/150/180 magic damage to enemies who walk through the lingering magma. Damage increases with ability power.28 second cooldown.
A standard AOE ability, so no problems here
Quote:
Originally Posted by Fierce Deity Fox View Post
Ultimate Ability: Reprisal Stare : Deals 100/150/200 damage times how many champion kills the target has made. The multiply effect "uses" their kills and will not multiply after they have been hit once. the target will have to kill more champions for the attack to multiply again. Assists are used if the target has not killed any champions. assists multiply damage by half their amount.120 second cooldownSound fun? sound weak? Sound too godly? let me know.
This is a great move, it takes the concept of a snowballing champion and turns it against them

Overall thoughts:
This hero has some really cool things happening for it =)
I would totally play this hero, it sounds really fun, and as such, you've done a good job
+1
I HAVE FURY

-Motas


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Auroros Osprey

Senior Member

03-03-2010

shameless bump.