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1Eredale

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02-13-2011

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?!?!?

What.


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TiberiusAudley

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02-13-2011

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what the **** do you want scrub?!?!?
JUNIOR member...

Did you register that just to do this? Or is that a smurf?


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The Punchline

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02-13-2011

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JUNIOR member...

Did you register that just to do this? Or is that a smurf?
i existed since before


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TiberiusAudley

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02-13-2011

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i existed since before
Weird coincidence.

Anyway, just finished some revisions to my initial post. It should read a lot better now, as well as help the reader feel more invested in Alaire as a character.


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Khristophoros

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02-13-2011

Not feeling the Alaire character yet. I kind of expect a more quirky and interesting personality from a professional fool, even if he's in the midst of such a grave predicament.


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TiberiusAudley

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02-13-2011

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Not feeling the Alaire character yet. I kind of expect a more quirky and interesting personality from a professional fool, even if he's in the midst of such a grave predicament.
He'll have plenty more time to stretch his legs once the games begin.

I'm doing a bit of "research" on the genre before the games kick-off. I want to make sure I nail the necessary feeling.


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TiberiusAudley

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02-19-2011

Part two added. It's in the original post, just below part 1. Gave a slightly bolded indicator.


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