(LOL Comic) Fist of Friendship

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HSSSH

Member

04-08-2013

Hi guys,
I draw a little comic about Caitlyn , Vi, and Zac,
have fun!

Attachment 655931

Here is the larger version of this comic (my deviant art page):
LOL: Fist of Friendship

If you think that there is anything I can improve in this comic,
or if there is anything in this comic that is confusing you,
feel free to reply here, appreciate it

Edit: I fixed the grammar, I don't know how to re upload the comic in this post, thank you guys!


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noxikon

Senior Member

04-09-2013

lol! Pretty good, and funny. In the last panel, Cait should be saying "No you didn't!" for the past tense consistency. Or if you want, she can be saying, "Oh No you don't!". But the first suggestion is better I think. Gj!


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kitcat300

Senior Member

04-09-2013

like she needs a reason to punch cait :P


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HSSSH

Member

04-09-2013

Thank you guys, I don't know how to re upload my comics here, anyway, I fixed the grammar in my deviant art page