A new champion approaches: Brienne the Solemn Maiden

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Captain Took

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10-30-2010

Born to high status but not favored with looks or grace, she took to weapons as a means to escape. She soon surpassed her male counterparts and rose to the role of personal guard of a powerful Lord. However, since the mysterious assassination of her lord, she has been on the run. Some say she killed him herself. Some say she could not have, for she loved him. Her face reveals her soul to be haunted by remorse, though we do not know if it's for wielding the blade or not being able to stop it.

She has joined the league to redeem herself, and vows to never let down her allies again.

Passive
Stubbornness
Whenever any CC is applied to her she takes 10% less damage during the duration of the CC. This effect persists 1 second after CC is removed.

Q spell
Ghosts of the Past
Brienne releases the demons that torment her, dealing AOE damage around her.

Whenever she or any allied champion takes damage, Brienne gains a stack of Torment. Stacks upto 20 times. The spell deals extra damage based on number of stacks.

-OR-

Whenever an allied champion takes damage Ghost cooldown is reduced by .5s.
(AOE farming/jungling tool)

W spell
Azure shield
Brienne places a shield on the target, increasing AR and MR of the target.

(It has been suggested this is lackluster. I am out of ideas how to improve this, please suggest.)

E spell
The Bear and the Maiden Fair
Brienne fools her enemy into thinking she is weaker than she really is, causing him to recklessly attack her. A portion of the attack damage is returned to the target.

(Short duration spammable taunt/initiation tool).

Ultimate
The Vow to Serve and Protect
Brienne vows to protect a target allied champion. 20%/40%/60% of the damage done to the target is transferred to Brienne for 6 seconds.

(The following would be interesting to have, but is anti pattern :P. She can have higher damage transfer percentages if the following is allowed).
If the target champion dies anyway, Brienne is overcome by remorse and is stunned for 1 second.


There you go, female tank champion.
Sorry about the rip off, whenever someone mentions female tanks she is the only one that comes to my mind.

Please comment what you think of the idea.


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Pyrellael

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10-30-2010

W spell
Azure shield
Brienne places a shield on the target, increasing AR and MR of the target.




































That's pretty lazy


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Captain Took

Senior Member

10-30-2010

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pyrellael View Post
W spell
Azure shield
Brienne places a shield on the target, increasing AR and MR of the target.
That's pretty lazy
Suggest something.

Without unnecessary whitespace.


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CondaMagoo

Senior Member

10-30-2010

cool another human mage ok cool another hu-


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Surgentia

Senior Member

10-30-2010

This belongs in the "Champion Feedback" section of the forum. Gtfo.


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Skorp

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10-30-2010

Quote:
Originally Posted by Surgentia View Post
This belongs in the "Champion Feedback" section of the forum. Gtfo.
Does anyone read that?

The E seems a bit unimaginative - here's my take:

Target champion gains 30/50/70/90/110 armor and magic resist for 5 seconds. During that time, if hit with any CC, this shield is absorbed and the CC is reflected back onto the caster.


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Stiletto

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10-30-2010

Spells are too wordy. Ranges are not discussed and they don't really look that different from those belonging to other champs.


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IS1721225ee39ff441ee5fe

Senior Member

10-30-2010

I like the concept, the spells themselves are fine but could be reworked into something more original (Sorry too lazy to suggest anything)
We really need a protect-type champion like this.
But PLEASE don't let it be a human who:
-holds a staff
-floats
-IS ANOTHER HUMAN.


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Dardars

Member

10-30-2010

No big bewbz = no deal.


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The Council

10-30-2010

I like the reference, but the skills themselves are pretty ehh.


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