Direnel, the Dragon Slayer

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Rykaal

Senior Member

02-04-2013

Direnel, the Dragon Slayer.

Roles: Melee AD, bruiser who focuses on critical strikes and incredible damage from basic attacks.

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Appearance: Dark red hair, Never showing any emotion, No shirt and Red pants with scorch marks all over them. dragon tatoos and burn marks all over his body. No weapons, just his bare hands.

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Lore: At a young age, Direnel was the oldest of his 4 brothers. Everything was peaceful for a long time in a small vilage outside of the demacian borders. Until a corupted dragon destroyed everything in his home, including his entire family. Devastated by the destruction he witnessed, He vowed to spend his life hunting down all dragons he would encounter as an act of revenge.

7 years passed and Direnel heard of a dragon attacking the areas around demacia. He joined up with Jarvan IV's assault group to take down the beast, He realized it was the same dragon who destroyed his home, Maryethu. He knew this is the moment he has been training his entire life for. After a long, rough battle, Maryethu was defeated and he flew away deep inside the mountains to the north.

Direnel knew this was not enough to just defeat the beast, He had to see it dead at his hands. He vowed to hunt Maryethu down. Even if it would take the rest of his life. Several years later, he showed up at the institute, body scared, and many marks over his past dragon hunting. He joined the league for reasons only known to him.

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Abilities.

(hidden passive: Dragon Slayer: gains 5 bonus gold upon killing Shyvanna, or Maryethu)

Passive: Slayers Fury: Every basic attack Direnel lands grants him 1 point of Fury, critical strikes generate 2 fury. when Direnel reaches 6 stacks of fury, he gains a 20% attack speed bonus. At 12 stacks, Direnel gains 2 points of Enrage making his next 2 basic attacks will be a garunteed critical hit, resets fury after both charges are used.

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Q: Raging Frenzy: Direnel dashes at a target dealing 50 / 70 / 90 / 110 / 130 physical damage (40% AD) and slowing enemies movement speed by 35%. 50% to enemies he passes through. for 2 seconds. Generates 2 fury.
12 / 10 / 8 / 6 / 4 second cooldown.

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W: Vengeful Power: Direnel goes into a frenzy increasing his physical damage dealt by 15% for 4 seconds, and granting his basic attacks 2 points of fury per hit.
24 / 21 / 18 / 15 / 12 second cooldown. Cost: 3 fury

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E: Flaming Fists: Direnel channels fire power into his fists, granting 30% bonus attack speed and 20 / 30 / 40 / 50 / 60 bonus armor for 3 seconds. Critical strikes drop 1 second off the cooldown.

Passive: 4 / 6 / 8 / 10 / 12% increased critical strike chance.
20 / 18 / 16 / 14 / 12 second cooldown. Cost: 3 fury

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R: Dragon's Wrath: Direnel marks a nearby enemy champion with fury, The marked champion recieves 35% increased damage from Direnel's basic attacks for 6 seconds. Direnel can activate this ability a second time to launch the marked target to a distant point on the map, and after a 1 second delay, Direnel follows them to their destination. Generates 6 fury. 150 / 140 / 130 second cooldown.

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To understand the rivalry. This link may help. The concept page for Maryethu.
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=3085004

Thanks dkslayer157 for allowing me to do this.


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dkslayer157

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02-04-2013

he seems cool

i noticed the name and thought of a idea we could do a hidden passive between maryethu and this guy.
post something on maryethus page if you like the idea


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Rykaal

Senior Member

02-04-2013

Bump


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Rykaal

Senior Member

02-05-2013

Bump...


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dkslayer157

Member

02-05-2013

I wana do the rivalry thing so however u wana make it happen go ahead


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Rykaal

Senior Member

02-05-2013

Bump... would like some feedback on this...


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MMHSTerror

Senior Member

02-06-2013

I'm not really seeing how his abilities link to him being a Dragon Slayer but I'll take a shot.

Evaluation Time!


Passive - You need some clarity about this, can you use the first critical strike, drain the fury and proceed with the second strike to reset all your fury? Or does it reset upon 12 and give you two charges for two criticals?


Q - Generic gap closer and slow, nothing special to comment on.


W - Consider giving this a scale as you rank up the ability, otherwise it would be pointless except for the cool down.


E - So....Kayle without splash? If you are making him a melee AD, why would you suddenly give him an ability that turns him into ranged?


R - Launch them...? Wha? Your champion doesn't seem like they could 1v1 any role besides support and you want to give him an isolation ability?


Overall I don't think he has the durability to be considered a bruiser. Bruisers generally stick to their abilities to do damage, not their basic attacks. He may have damage and a high rate of critical hits but without an attack speed boost, he won't have a chance to match any of the other auto attack champions.
By not building almost pure AD, you are not making good use of half his kit. This champion is far too basic and far too weak.


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Rykaal

Senior Member

02-07-2013

Fixed him up a bit, added a few things he was missing, fixed a bit of the numbers. All that crazy stuff.

Also bump.