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OMW KEEP GOING!!!!! 9 26.47%
Good, good. 12 35.29%
Meh... 9 26.47%
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The Aatrox Chronicles, Book 1

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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

Demacian Study Team, Aatrox Report,1st Segment
June16th 2012
Rivertown ,Shurima Dessert
9:00 pm
TEXT BEGINS

|Shiva|: Our oldest discovery so far on this mythical being is dates back at 100 B.C. The ancient civilization known as the Protectorate seemed to received random help from Aatrox in their desperate struggle against the Magelords. This victory turned the tide of the battle and aroused a new fire in the Protectorate soldiers. They continued to triumph over the Magelords. Later in the story however we learn that instead of these battles being glorious triumphs, they were in fact brutal slaughters. This, and other stories, give us evidence that Aartox’s presence has a perverse psychological effect on those he assists causing them to become ruthless killers.

|M.A.I.|: You are making the claim that Aartox’s mere presence in a battle causes humans to become brutal murders?

|Shiva|: Not only humans but other intelligent life. Once a horde of elementals was affected.

|M.A.I.|: Is there a cure?

|Shiva|: None that we no of.

|M.A.I.|: I must report this to the S.M.A.I. immediately.

TEXT ENDS

(Notice: M.A.I. stands for Magic Artificial Intelligence. S.M.A.I. stands for Super M.A.I.)

I will continue making segments for as long as people keep reading. Constructive criticism welcome.

I understand this is restating his lore basically, with a few twists of course, but trust me it will get better.

Please comment or answer the poll, thanks!


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

If you recognize the writing style from some of the HALO books, you so fly. XD


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

BuMp


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

bUmP


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

Dont leave me hangin guys.


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

BUMP, for heavens sake PLS


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PurpleKingCrazy

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06-18-2013

Good good good keep going keep going gotta go gotta go.

Geez I'm talking like Ziggs.


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

Quote:
Originally Posted by PurpleKingCrazy View Post
Good good good keep going keep going gotta go gotta go.

Geez I'm talking like Ziggs.
Thank you for your feedback.


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TheWatchGuard

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06-18-2013

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Peffern

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06-23-2013

Nice. Can't really give feedback 'til you write more.


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