I have a new champion fanmade by myself

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Magmaboy1

Member

01-17-2013

Fire:
Basic Attacks Ignite targets every 10 attacks
Q Throw a ball of fire igniting the target
W Heals Ally shielding them and Igniting close enemy champions every 10 seconds
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are ignited
Water:
Basic Attacks Slow target every 10 attacks
Q A flow of water splashes and slows a target
W Heals Ally shielding them and slowing close enemy champions every 10 seconds
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are slowed
Earth:
Basic attacks Stun Targets
every 10 attacks
Q The ground rises in a single direction stunning enemy champions in line until it reaches the target
W Heals Ally shielding them and stunning close enemy champions every 10 seconds
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are stunned

Wind:
Basic Attacks Send target flying every 10 attacks
Q A tornado is sent to a target sending enemy champions flying until it reaches the target
W Heals Ally shielding them and Sends flying close enemy champions every 10 seconds
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are sent flying
ULT
Mana:50
No Cooldown
Passive:
Per level choose a new element. Active: Change elemental forms



Lore:

There is a galaxy with four celestial systems subterra, pyrus, ventus, and aquos. On each planet are elementals of one element who live amongst their own kind ground-subterra, fire-pyrus, air-ventus, water-aquos and one sole elemental are chosen to hone the power of all the elementals and act as a judge of all the beings of the galaxy and is named the Elementus.
A sole elemental that showed judgment with no emotion even against those of his own element for overall justice was chose to be the Elementus. When they asked for his name he said he lacked a name because he never knew his parents and was named Sagacity and he seemed to observe the behavior of other elementals without emotion allowing better judgment to take over his mind rather than emotion. After mastering all the elements he lived in solitude the way he had lived and will continue to live his entire life. Then there was a huge eruption where the celestial systems subterra and ventus rebelled claiming Sagacity lacked the power and judgment to make the decisions. There and then Sagacity decided to leave for the League of Legends to prove himself to his people.


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Dzanio

Senior Member

01-17-2013

These ideas are generally posted on Player Concepts, fyi.


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Frost Archer

Senior Member

01-19-2013

^ yea, he beat me to it Also, the people there take this kinda stuff rather seriously (not saying your not) but go over there and check it out. they spend some serious time and effort.

Best of luck!


Also. Too op. Should nerf...
The point of making a champion is to make them balanced. I'm sorry but your current idea would NEVER be accepted. Tbh, your most balanced one is Water stance.
There are too many stances for the ult. how will you switch? Should be like Udyr or Sona, one stance per ability.
Heal OR Shield. Not both. That is not balanced.
If ignite is a summoner spell, it is considered powerful. Ignite is not a good idea.
knockbacks and knock ups and stuns are very powerful. Champions only have 1, maybe 2 if one is their ult. you have 6
Also, your Wind idea is a copy of Janna. I is dissapoint.

To be honest, you just crammed: malphite, brand, nami, and Janna together but using Jayce's or Elise's ult as ult. Consider being more original.


eg.

Quote:
Fire:
Basic Attacks Ignite targets every 10 attacks - what is ignite for then? It's a summoner spell designed for use every 200 sec (approx.)
Q Throw a ball of fire igniting the target - no ignite pls
W Heals Ally shielding them and Igniting close enemy champions every 10 seconds - A heal too? your ignite idea is not very good. To powerful. Heal is heal. Shield is shield. Sunfire cape is Sunfire cape. Not all in one.
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are ignited - Still to op. Maybe something like morgana's e?
Water:
Basic Attacks Slow target every 10 attacks - This is ok. But must be short slow. Like Ashe's. every 15 attacks is more fair. cuz ashe needs to use a spell to do that.
Q A flow of water splashes and slows a target - Fair
W Heals Ally shielding them and slowing close enemy champions every 10 seconds - Remove the slow. Then Fair.
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are slowed - Fair, depending on duration and radius.
Earth:
Basic attacks Stun Targets
every 10 attacks - no. Stun too op. Can cancle ult channels. Sorry.
Q The ground rises in a single direction stunning enemy champions in line until it reaches the target - Dude, that's like Malphite's ULT. Too op. Are you new at this?
W Heals Ally shielding them and stunning close enemy champions every 10 seconds As said stun is too powerful. Please reconsider. since earth champion, better shield than heal.
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are stunned - That's plausible. Sort of like Veigar.

Wind:
Basic Attacks Send target flying every 10 attacks - A knock back is too powerful.
Q A tornado is sent to a target sending enemy champions flying until it reaches the target - Too much like Janna. Originality please.
W Heals Ally shielding them and Sends flying close enemy champions every 10 seconds - Heal or shield. Not both, and no knockback.
E Creates a field where enemy champions within the area are sent flying - Janna's ult, monsoon. Not original, to powerful. Please reconsider.
ULT
Mana:50 - since so powerful, should cost more.
No Cooldown - Not fair. should have 40-100 sec cool down if you have so many different stances.
Passive:
Per level choose a new element. Active: Change elemental forms

Now to the lore:

Quote:
Lore:

There is a galaxy with four celestial systems subterra, pyrus, ventus, and aquos not sure where you get the names but they are ok. On each planet are elementals reconsider word of one element who live amongst their own kind ground-subterra, fire-pyrus, air-ventus, water-aquos These are not elements. and one sole elemental are chosen to hone the power of all the elementals and act as a judge of all the beings of the galaxy and is named the Elementus.
A sole elemental that showed judgment with no emotion even against those of his own element for overall justice was chose to be the Elementus. When they asked for his name he said he lacked a name because he never knew his parents and was named Sagacity Saga. City. Really? and he seemed to observe the behavior of other elementals without emotion allowing better judgment to take over his mind rather than emotion. After mastering all the elements he lived in solitude the way he had lived and will continue to live his entire life. Then there was a huge eruption where the celestial systems subterra and ventus rebelled claiming Sagacity lacked the power and judgment to make the decisions. There and then Sagacity decided to leave for the League of Legends to prove himself to his people.
Don't mind if I ask but, How old are you? You don't have to answer, but it would allow me to understand better.