Chatting more with people who don't post on the forums, this is from a skype conversation with an acquaintance of mine. His chat will be in quotes with my response underneath. If in my responses it's in (parenthesis) it is a thought from now, and not a response back.
This next conversation is with another acquaintance of mine. He is one of the more knowlegable of the group I hang out with when it comes to League matters. Format will be in the same for as the conversation in the last post.
Thank you so much Moby. Take your time reading it, it's nice enough to know that some people are.
I hope I answered all your questions in the notes as well as from the two conversations with my friends listed above. If anything was not covered yet. Please mention it and I will attempt to go into as much detail as I can.
Reason: syntax missed a point for spelling and grammar
Reason I absolutely loved it, fits the theme perfectly!!!
Reason: I loved both abilities and her second Q is like fizz's flip in my mind.
Reason Balance the armor penetration has more penetration than Last Whisper. Plus veil of shadows seems to work more like graves smoke rather than brush.
Reason: i feel that if she is unseen at anytime she should also get the buff
Reason I was really excited about the low cooldown giving me ample opportunity to play with the doppel!
Bonus Points: Originality +1, Organization +1
Total Lore PQWER: 145/150
Thank you for the very generous review Moby the White.
I will attempt to fix the spelling and grammar errors in the lore later and of course when I find them.
i only docked you one point for the unseen thing and on that it was purely my opinion and that was due to it being based off of the lore...
if nobody sees her she would get that bonus yes?
that was why i said that...
also the veil was a tad confusing but ill try to reread it and fully grasp it I only meant that maybe it seems like people in it can't see out of it. Brush prevents people from seeing into it... sooo
maybe its either :
Like Akali's smoke screen or Like graves smoke screen
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