[MCCC Champion Concept] Beatrice, Pleasure's Herald

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Villanova

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11-03-2011

THIS CHAMPION IS NOT A MCCC ENTRY! PLEASE DISREGARD IT AS SUCH!


Alright, so, this is my entry for the month's contest. It's a bit tongue in cheek, and fairly implicating. However, I'm going to assume that a large portion of the forums are mature enough to handle this, so, without further ado, meet Beatrice, Pleasure's Herald.

(Yes, I know I'm probably going to hell for this.)



Beatrice, Pleasure's Herald

Appearance:

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Beatrice has long, flowing, white hair, done in a french braid. Her face is soft and cheery, and her skin is creamy and looks very smooth. She doesn't have a single blemish on her body, and has a very voluptuous figure. She is wearing what appears like a very 'flattering' bishop's robe. Sporting blues, pinks, whites, and reds, the robe is long enough to cover above her knees, and is slit open down the center of the bottom. The top portion of the robe covers her belly, and some of her chest (The important stuff is covered, but there is plenty of skin on display). She is wearing a small gold circlet with a single heart shaped ruby in the center. She is also wearing white, lacy stockings with white stiletto heals to accompany them. She wears a small belt of rings with various gemstones embedded in them. Her wings resemble that of Kayle's, except they seem very dainty and are snowy white. (Think dove's wings.) She's wearing long, white, silk gloves, and she emanates a soft pink radiance. The art depicts her sitting on a stone bench, reading out of a small blue and pink book, with her whip at her side.
Lore:
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Many Runeterrans believe in a higher power. A divine being who abolishes the wicked in death, and guards the souls of the pure in the afterlife. Scriptures differ from civilization to civilization, and as such, disputes between beliefs is common. The arrival of Kayle and her sister Morgana only fed the fire. People claimed them to be polar opposites, a servant form above and from below. Despite knowledge, and even the champions themselves claiming otherwise, intelligence often gives way to fanaticism. However, this changed with the arrival of a particular entity.

In several small settlements on the border of the Great Barrier, if asked about their patron deity, they will point to Herrah, their goddess of pleasure and happiness. Many priests and prophets dismiss Herrah as just a simple excuse for sinful behavior, as it was common for followers of Herrah to display and indulge in pleasure openly. Priestesses of Herrah were often seen as prostitutes under a holy guise, and their scriptures nothing more than obscene filth, unfit to be spoken while on holy ground. As such, it was common for followers to hide their faith when outside of their own settlements, and it was this disguise that led Beatrice to the Institute of War.

As a young couple of summoners declared their love for each other, the man asked his bride to be if he could pray to Herrah for their health. The woman, unknown to who this goddess was, allowed it without question. As the young summoner recited scriptures that he had heard and memorized since his youth, his wife only became more enthralled and in love with him. As they closed the prayer as was customary, with a kiss, the two were enveloped in a radiant light. The light blinded them both, and scared them, but they clung together tightly, and hoped for the best. When the light faded, there stood an angel. A rather unusual one for most major beliefs, but an angel nonetheless. "My name is Beatrice, Herald of Pleasure for Herrah, the Goddess of Pleasure and Happiness. I was drawn here by your unconditional love for each other, and you have my blessing."

The man was starstruck, and immediately begged Beatrice to bless them in a holy union. Beatrice gladly agreed, and within minutes she was reciting the holy vows that would bind them together in love and life. Just as the couple were about to complete the ritual, several other League summoners stormed in, attracted by the large pulse of magical energy Beatrice generated upon entry. The summoners were fronted by the champion Kayle, sword blazing and eyes filled with righteous fire. Beatrice was slightly stunned, but nonetheless greeted them "Oh! Hello! My name is Beatrice, Herald of P-" Beatrice was cut short, as the summoners quickly cast arcane spells to bind and subdue her. To the couple's dismay, Beatrice was carried off to the Institute of War, for testing and eventual champion assimilation.

Beatrice now fights in the League, albeit unwillingly. She would rather go home, or preach her scriptures to those who would listen. However, no one seems to listen to what she has to say, other than the couple she almost created a union for, and the fallen angel Morgana. Beatrice takes some solace in that she has a friend, but still misses the whole point of the League of Legends, seeing it as hurtful and unproductive.


"There has been a sharp decrease in focus from the male summoners since Beatrice began fighting and preaching in the League." ~ Excerpt from the Journal of Justice

"She's a fool. A half naked, ditsy fool." ~ Kayle

"Beatrice is freedom of expression taken form. Most people are just upset because she has the nerve to do things most people wouldn't dare." ~ Morgana
Stats:
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Health: 470 (+90/lvl)
Armor: 19 (2.5/lvl)
Magic Resist: 30
Health Regen: 1 (.25/lvl) 5.25 @ 18
Movement Speed: 320
Attack Damage: 50 (3/lvl) 101 @ 18
Range: 125
Ability Power: 0
Abilities:
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Passive - Nymphomancy:

As a creature of pleasure, Beatrice's abilities use the pleasure running through her body as a supplement, increasing Beatrice's Ability Power by 2.5/5/10% of her current Pleasure. Beatrice generates Pleasure, (Up to a maximum of 200) by dealing or taking damage. She generates 5 pleasure for each time she deals damage, and 10 pleasure each time she takes damage from any source. Pleasure decays at a rate of 2% every second after being out of combat for 3 seconds.

Q - Love Tap:

Beatrice lashes out with her whip in target direction, latching onto the first enemy unit it comes into contact with. After 2 seconds, Beatrice pulls her whip back to her, dealing 60/80/100/120/140 (.6 AP) magic damage and stuns them for 1 second. If possible, Beatrice expends 50 Pleasure to instead deal 80/100/120/140/160 (.8 AP) magic damage and pull herself and her attached enemy together. (The two will meet at the halfway point between each other.)

Range: 650 (100 distance wide projectile)
Cooldown: 18/16/14/12/10 seconds

W - Bodily Control:

Passive: Beatrice generates and extra 2/4/6/8/10 Pleasure upon receiving damage.

Active: Beatrice uses all of her available Pleasure to calm and control her body, allowing it to absorb up to 75/75/100/100/125% + (.5 AP) of the amount of expended Pleasure in damage for 5 seconds.

Range: self
Cooldown: 24/21/18/15/12 Seconds

E - Pleasurable Company:

Beatrice fires a bolt of blue energy from her lips in target direction. If it hits an enemy champion their movement speed is increased by 20/25/30/35/40%(+ 1% for each 50 ability power you have.) and they are taunted towards Beatrice, running madly towards her for 2 seconds. Within 2 seconds after casting this ability, Beatrice may activate Pleasurable Company again to expend 75 Pleasure and increase her Attack Damage by 15/20/25/30/35% of her Ability Power for 5 seconds.

Range: 500 (50 distance wide projectile)
Cooldown: 27/24/21/18/15 seconds
Window to activate Pleasure: 2 seconds after casting

R - Union:

Beatrice teleports to target area, and begins searching for a suitable partner. After selecting her partner (The nearest enemy champion she can see.) She moves within 300/400/500 distance of them, and channels for 1 second. If the channel isn't broken or interrupted, both Beatrice, and her partner teleport back to Beatrice's original location, and the partner takes 1/2/3 magic damage for each point of Pleasure Beatrice is missing.

Range of first teleport: 600/650/700
Cooldown: 140/100/60 seconds
Quotes:
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Upon Selection:

"We shall bring them pleasure!"


Moving:

"Such a wonderful plane this is..."

"Do I have to?"

"Ah, there's a warm breeze on the whind!"

"Only for you."


Attacking:

"Now you've made me mad!"

"Eek!"

"J-just what are you staring at?"

"Pain for pleasure!"


Taunt:

"Aww! Look at how little your number of kills is! It's so cute!"

"Are you even trying to win? Or is running into my attacks a kink of yours?"

"Is this what it's like? When noobs cry?"


Jokes:

"What do those OTHER angel girls have that I don't?"

"I'd like to tell you a joke summoner, but I was told not to tell jokes from my native home because there are champions present..."

"All of my past partners always say that they want me so bad it's driving them mad, but they all call me 'heavy'. *sigh* I'll never understand Runeterrans."


While casting Union:

"Ah, there you are!" (50% chance regardless)

"My boyfiend!" (50% chance when targeting a male champion)

"C'mere cutie!" (50% chance when targeting a female champion)
Animations:
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Moving:

Beatrice flies, flapping her wings several times, then allowing herself to glide while moving. If standing still for more than a few flaps, she will land and begin to tap her foot.


Normal Attack:

Beatrice lashes her target with her whip.


Critical Hit:

Beatrice's whip glows pink, then she swings it overhead at her target.


Love Tap:

Beatrice lashes out with her whip and it becomes attached to the first enemy unit it hits. Beatrice keeps her hand extended as long as her target is attached, and after the duration, she yanks on her end. If Pleasure is expended, she yanks with both hands, and pulls herself towards her attached enemy.


Bodily Control:

Beatrice's body shines and glows alternating blues and light reds as long as her shield persists.


Pleasurable Company:

Beatrice blows a kiss in the targeted direction, and a blue heart travels down its path, popping into many smaller blue hearts when it collides with something. Affected targets have a trail of blue hearts coming from their heads while they are taunted. If Pleasure is expended, Beatrice begins to leave a trail of red hearts above her head for the duration of her buff.


Union:

Beatrice teleports in with a flash of blue and pink light, and creates a semi large red heart above her head. After she finds her champion, she begins to channel and a beam of pink light goes towards the targeted champion. If the beam reaches her target, both teleport back to Beatrice's original location, and a big red heart is left where her targeted champion was standing before he/she was teleported.


Joke:

Beatrice lands, and puts her hands on her hips, and looks off to the side.


Taunt/Laugh:

Beatrice covers her mouth with her book and points, making a giggling gesture.


Dance:

Beatrice lands, and begins to strut provocatively, tossing her head back with each step.

OR

Beatrice lands, and begins to moonwalk, striking a pose at the end, and moonwalks back to where she started.

OR

Beatrice lands, and begins dancing to an unheard upbeat song. She goes through several, very 80s, dance moves, and you can faintly make out a blue reflection of Beatrice dancing with her.

(Can't decide, pick one.)

Death:

Beatrice falls to her knees and begins crying, before disappearing in a pink light.
Playing as Beatrice:

Make sure to take advantage of hybrid items to make yourself more adaptable. Items like Guinsoo's Rageblade, Hextech Gunblade, among others are good choices for Beatrice.

Don't ignore your Pleasure, as it disappears soon after combat. Take advantage of it while it's there!

Bodily Control allows you to shrug off sustained damage easier, however, you have no real defense against high burst damage. Be cautious when approaching casters and other burst champions.

Lich Bane is an excellent choice for an AP heavy Beatrice, as it allows you to take out both towers and champions alike much quicker.



Playing Against Beatrice:

Love Tap doesn't pierce minions, use them as cover while harassing Beatrice early game.

Due to Bodily Control and Beatrice's Pleasure gauge, don't try to out DPS her in a straight fight. Employ the help of a caster, or some form of high burst.

Beatrice is highly vulnerable while casting Union, take advantage of it and CC her during it, to trap her within your team.

Beatrice's attacks are mainly magic damage. Build Magic Resistance and possibly a Banshee's Veil to protect yourself.



Recommended Items:

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Mercury's Treads

Lich Bane

Guinsoo's Rageblade

Rylai's Crystal Scepter

Zhonya's Hourglass

Void Staff
Suggested Runes:


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3x Greater Quintessences of Fortitude (Health, like Cowbell, you need more of it.)

9x Greater Marks of Insight (Magic Penetration. Common sense.)

9x Greater Seals of Warding/Armor (Whichever defensive stat you feel is more important. Can actually go the secondary route for Potency, or even more health. Would probably want to steer clear of dodge, since Beatrice generates pleasure by taking damage.)

9x Greater Glyphs of Celerity (?) (CDR per Level. Could go with more potency here, or even Warding if you wished.)


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ElementSteel

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11-03-2011

The council has seen your Holy Succubus, and deem her to be more of a tank than a carry.

Also, shouldn't she get more pleasure from DEALING damage rather than RECEIVING it? Unless you wanna keep 'er as a tank. Just as well, cooldowns need to be reduced all around (except Union).


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Villanova

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11-03-2011

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Originally Posted by ElementSteel View Post
The council has seen your Holy Succubus, and deem her to be more of a tank than a carry.

Also, shouldn't she get more pleasure from DEALING damage rather than RECEIVING it? Unless you wanna keep 'er as a tank. Just as well, cooldowns need to be reduced all around (except Union).
Gotcha sir. Twas only a quickie really. Had a class to attend. Back now, and I plan on fixing.


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DeRickulous

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11-03-2011

Flavor: Undeniably unique, but easily an order of magnitude more risque than anything else in the game. I mean, this is dirtier than my mom. Like whoa.

Nymphology: Instead of being a passive, this should probably just be a resource system, and you should try for a new passive.

Love Tap: Ah, Warlock puns. Or maybe that was unintentional. Anyway, damage seems low, and two forms of crowd control within two seconds have the potential to cause frustration to either Bea (if they're partially or totally wasted) or her target (what, AGAIN?).

Bodily Control: The passive pushes Bea a little too much toward being a tank rather than a carry. A late game carry won't take many hits before being demolished, so this will be useless either because she's safe or because she's dead. The AP ratio on the active is probably low, and the overall cost seems potentially high.

Pleasurable Company: Again, too much tank. You won't find a carry with a taunt because carries can't survive taunting any target that matters. The AP coefficient is probably low, either because this is how she becomes an AP carry, or because she's meant to be an AD carry and actually benefit from having a little AP.

Union: This is interesting. I'm not sure what I think of it yet. It doesn't seem to support a carry role very well, as this seems to be more for ganking than anything else- but maybe that's ok.


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Salamander Joe

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11-03-2011

I only think of rape when i red this -_-


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Villanova

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11-03-2011

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Originally Posted by DeRickulous View Post
Flavor: Undeniably unique, but easily an order of magnitude more risque than anything else in the game. I mean, this is dirtier than my mom. Like whoa.

Nymphology: Instead of being a passive, this should probably just be a resource system, and you should try for a new passive.

Love Tap: Ah, Warlock puns. Or maybe that was unintentional. Anyway, damage seems low, and two forms of crowd control within two seconds have the potential to cause frustration to either Bea (if they're partially or totally wasted) or her target (what, AGAIN?).

Bodily Control: The passive pushes Bea a little too much toward being a tank rather than a carry. A late game carry won't take many hits before being demolished, so this will be useless either because she's safe or because she's dead. The AP ratio on the active is probably low, and the overall cost seems potentially high.

Pleasurable Company: Again, too much tank. You won't find a carry with a taunt because carries can't survive taunting any target that matters. The AP coefficient is probably low, either because this is how she becomes an AP carry, or because she's meant to be an AD carry and actually benefit from having a little AP.

Union: This is interesting. I'm not sure what I think of it yet. It doesn't seem to support a carry role very well, as this seems to be more for ganking than anything else- but maybe that's ok.

Thanks for the reply, and , it sort of fit my definition of a carry, ableit a bit tankier. (Isn't that the current meta anyways?)

The definition I have of a carry is the following:

Champ needs to deal good damage.

Champ needs to be able to kill towers easily.

Champs needs to be relatively squishy.

CC is optional.


It basically fit everything I had in mind, but maybe I was sort of heavy handed with the CC. And I know the taunt was unorthodox, but, it just felt right with her flavor. I'm thinking of way to carryify her as we speak, so, I'll come up with something. (Also, the champion is only as dirty as the reader.)


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Villanova

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11-03-2011

Well, there she is. More carry than tank now, hopefully.


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Katárina

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11-03-2011

Villanova... I really liek this character! It made me chuckle when reading it. I was wondering if, by chance with your permission, you could email me more about it? I think I have a LoL story im writting that would be awesome for her!


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Villanova

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11-03-2011

Eh, go for it. Just don't turn it into open porn or anything.


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Katárina

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Hahah nah nothing like that. thanks.


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