Ok, so as you asked, I'm here to give my opinion on Cambrio.
First of all, I must tell you I hate your lore... You have a guy who would be so op he can turn anyone insane, and already attacked one of their summoner, and the Institute does nothing about it... So it would means they feel threatened? They still are strong enough to keep 105 different beasts under control... So take every champions in the league, twice, and that's how strong your champion would be... But, he would still not be strong enough to solo carry a 5v5 every single games...
The passive I kinda like, kinda dislike... basically, what I dislike is the fact that it hard counters so many peoples... First of all, Kata, Poppy, Talon, Nidalee, Teemo, Lux... They're all champions who has to land at least 1 AA in... even pantheon is rough on them and it's only reducing the damage to 0, end game you have twice pan's passive on a shorter cd.
Q : you have some insanely strong poke in a terri-huge area with an added minion summon... It basically deals 125/200/275/350/425 (+0.8AP) in an AoE, and you can summon multiple damage-dealing and skillshot-blocking minions... It really is strong, even if just in concept (a high damage dealing minion summoning AoE spell).
W : Once again a bit too strong, especially since your passive by itself could be an ability... Ninja Tabi is considered an excellent pick against physical champs and it's only 10% off Auto-attacks. If you grab those + max W, you receive 22-23% dmg reduction on AA... that's a huge truckload (especially paired with block mastery and doran shield, since you cut another ~10-15 dmg). Honestly, I'd insta lock him top every single games...
E : Well, either this one is terribly op, or fairly weak (although in this case, it's a question of numbers, so no problem there). If those numbers are per second, I'll start pissing myself right now... But I guess they're over the 6s, and I think you could raise them a bit. But conceptually, it would work.
R : The channel might be a bit long... you'd have to at least make it a cast time... Because a long cast time is already easy to dodge when your champion has no cc, but if you can even interrupt it, it feels too weak to me. Otherwise I love the concept of a charge-up cone and of madness.
First off, I want to thank you for taking the time to do this. Now let me address you concerns.
On the lore, The League doesn't really care what you do to summoners as long as you consent to join and allow them to study you. That is the case here.
For the passive I don't really understand the complaint. It won't nullify the special effects of AA just the AA itself. Illumination will still trigger, Poppy's crush will still work, all of those things will still effect him. Its just a little poke protection.
Now regarding the Q I see you point. But please remember that it only creates a demon if it kill something. However, since you aren't the first person to say this I'll assume that you are correct. I will reduce the life time on the minions and increase the cooldown on the ability.
For the W, one part of your comment is defense masteries. This guy is a mage. A hard hitting mage. You going to be sacrificing a lot just to pick up those little damage blockers. Now for what you say on the reduction, theoretically that could happen. However that comes at the cost of increased cooldown and lower Magic Penetration. This guy's cooldowns are pretty hefty so that's a blow.
As for the ult, its a pretty powerful ult. There has to be a chance for enemies to save themselves.
Thanks again for the review.
Hello, and thanks for your Review of Genesis, I appreciate it. So, even if you didn't asked me, I shall review your champion in kind.
Ouch. Though I suppose that most of your points are fair.
I'm changing the passive to what you suggested. Never really thought about it like that before thanks for the opposite perspective.
As for the Q I will nerf the base damage; hope that balances things out.
With the W you I removed the passive but I think I will keep the double hit part. Technically it has the capacity for some solid burst damage but then he is putting himself at risk with no way to escape. That's his solo escape move and should he choose to use it for offensive purposes he would very vulnerable.
I scrapped the E and will come up with something new in due time.
As for the R...I really did like the ability but if friendly fire is such a problem...sigh. I suppose I could come up with something else.
Thank you for the review. It was harsh, but it was probably needed. Thanks again and good luck with the contest.
Thanks to all the reviews I noticed several flaws in Cambio's character and decided to scrap him and make a new champion. I want to thank all of you for you feedback and support and let you know how much I appreciate it. If any of you are interested His replacement can be found here. http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...4#post33686684
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