Zelos, the Wrath of the Rejected

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Nevrus

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11-19-2012

A thought just occurred to me that his ultimate should probably disappear just before hitting a summoner platform, so I'm adding that.


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Nevrus

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11-20-2012

I'm bumping because it's now a reasonable time.


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Leo Tomita

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11-23-2012

Sorry for take so long i was taking care of some other requests...

Holy ****! that was the biggest concept i ever seen!

i like what you did here...you have the gift of the written word...i havent.. have not

so lets start this...

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Passive: Brooding
excelent innate...it really looks like Rumbles innate but adapted for his theme... i like the mechanics...but the numbers are too thick...6% per fury point is kinda strongy...with 4 fury it is gonna be 24% more damage at next attack...kinda build full bloodthirst's and BOOM....my sugestion here is to low this 6% for a bit...
but the skills have a huge CD ...thinking properly ..it looks balanced...i'll be back on this skill in a moment

only now i realize that this isnt Live transmission..LoL im so Stoopid...i was reviewing the ult and i came back here....the amout of time Zelos lost his fury is too short...the time between minion waves is way larger than 5 seconds...he will be depleted every time...needing to farm Fury again in order to better harassment...

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Ability One: Equal Hatred
....i dont fully understand this skill...its a skillshot? you aim a scaping enemy and starts to attack some minions or whatever is near Zelos...and the targeted enemy will take the damage as well?...if i am correct...you realizes that with no range limit this could be OP right? the 600 range is only for attacks performed directly into the target?...
but...
if the target run like hell during the time he is being chased by the sword? the skill is cancelled? Zelos continues to be range champion for that duration?

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Ability Two: Freedom......Zelos concentrates his will to deflect an attack back at its origin. For the next second, he will deflect the next line skillshot, ranged attack, or single targeted spell that affects him back at the point of origin, caster, or attacker for 40/45/50/55/60% of the initial damage of the ability or attack.
i like the idea but i see skills like Veigar's Balefull Strike...Ashe's arrow....Cait Ult..and so on...BUT...what about Allistar's Headbut??? this skill is a single target spell that affect Zelos at the point of origin...what would happen? he will take damage? will be knockbacked? Allistar will take some damage as well?...Warwick's Hungering Strike??and most dangerous of all spells here quoted...Noxian Guillotine!!! and some other spells?..could you explain the deflect part of skills like that?
the CD is fine...because it will force players to use correctly...not a Spam ..ME GUSTA

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Ability Three: Cut to the Chase
...your Rationale part...says everything...low the numbers for a quite a bit...AD ratio is high...CD is too low for a placement/damage dealing/ Fury generator skill...50% at the end after all that is too high in my eyes too...
(my Thoughts) i am sure that i wrote thoughts wrong...fuk it!.....keep the CD and put something like 30- 40% AD ratio...15 to 25% damage at the end of the slash...generating 1 or 2 Fury...put 3 Fury on the second skill Freedom...is harder to "land"
other than that ...its a fine skill...flee from him is kinda tricky right? Q + E skill can be a real "beach" to the enemies

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Ability Four: Warbringer
Generates 5 Fury on Champion Hit
...i dont follow you in this one...Zelos throw the sword in a line...if it hits a enemy champion he goes there....gains 5 points in fury...ok so far? so what happens then??? he cant use any other skill because of his innate...5 seconds silence?ok you will deal tons of damage in both attacks Ult+next attack...but if you dont kill the target you will be in troubles with tower diving without Freedom and Cut to the Chase...

you only miss the defensive stats..armor and MR...i think its ok your base stats...soon ill review your Lore.....


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Leo Tomita

Senior Member

11-25-2012

pick any of these champs


Sari - the Crystalline Stalker
Melee, Assassin

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Red Army - the Strongest
Range, Carry, Socialist, Strong
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Ischyros - the Shattering Hammer
Melee, Bruiser, Support
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Jenny - "ye" Suicidal Loser
Melee, Tank
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Yan - the Ruthless Madman
Range, Mage

pick only one...and when/if you want more reviews...post in my Index.... and review any other of these champs...because they are the newest...and i got anything about them...so....


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