Embracing the Faithful, Protecting the Heretic. Diana x Leona

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Sacrix

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01-28-2013

I cannot wait to read more. This is a very well done fan-fiction, overlooking the occasionally spelling, and grammatical errors. It's a real page turner, if there were pages to turn.

For any works you have to come after this, and for chapters to come, you've got a well in doubt fan in me.


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saladeo

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02-05-2013

Bump , please get me out of my suffering


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Argent Heretic

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02-05-2013

Bump, The wait is just agonizing


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Ark Angel HFB

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02-07-2013

lol sure sure I'll get another chapter up sooner rather than later. ^_^

thanks for the interest guys.


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YSRS

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02-09-2013

I enjoyed your work, but i stopped reading at the end of chapter 4. I am not sure what it is it just feels as if the pace of the story is a little... forced? I enjoyed the plot and I will probably return to read more.

Just not my cup of tea at the moment.


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Ark Angel HFB

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02-09-2013

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Originally Posted by YSRS View Post
I enjoyed your work, but i stopped reading at the end of chapter 4. I am not sure what it is it just feels as if the pace of the story is a little... forced? I enjoyed the plot and I will probably return to read more.

Just not my cup of tea at the moment.
So end of chapter four... meaning the pace of chapter four, or just the pace up to that point?

I'm always up for a edits if you can give some exact examples. ^_^

Thanks greatly for the thought on the fic, btw.


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Sacrix

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02-15-2013

The wait, it's murder. I re-read the story again just to prepare. Don't make me suffer long please.
; u ;


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Ark Angel HFB

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02-15-2013

Sigh... I was going to get some games in but I guess I'll go write the chapter that set up a lot of the rest of the plot...


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saladeo

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02-16-2013

Do it, for our great goddess, Leona.


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xcyper33

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02-17-2013

Amazing! Keep it up!!