I'm aware that Judgements are in first-person, but there are a few reasons that I made Ephrial's the way it is. I did have plans to change it to a first-person format classic Judgement style, but that fizzled out to make room for sketches of Ephrial. If you actually read this, I hope you enjoy!
Wow this is one of the more fleshed out champion ideas I've seen. good job.
What can I add though?
I can't say I like how you created Ephrial's sister just to kill her off for the sake of Ephrial's character development.
I also don't get how Ephrial's Ultimate is supposed to play into the rest of his kit. Does he use it to initiate or finish? Does he use it in a team fight or to pick off a solitary target? I'm not sure how useful it is.
Any way this is one of the better put-togther champs I've seen. I can't find too much to criticise. I hope you've found this helpful. If you want to take a look at my champion she's right here http://forums.na.leagueoflegends.com....php?t=4094946
Okay so that explains my question about his ult.
About what I was saying about his sister, I feel I should clarify. Are you familiar with the term "Stuffed into the Refrigerator?" It refers to a tendency in comic book story-telling (but happens in other media too) to kill off side characters purely to raise the stakes in the main character's conflict. The problem is that the killed character is defined by their powerlessness. They are given no redeeming traits, no volition and, tbh, can be replaced by any object and you get the same exact story. The problem is that the side character is reduced to an object.
It's not that your story is bad, but I and many others may take exception to that one element.
Stats: These seem like fair numbers to be honest, the no resource idea might come back and bite you eventually. *
Passive: This seems a little broken to me, giving him BOTRK will make him nearly unstoppable in lane with the constant crits. *
(Idea): Switch the Q and the E, because it seems Sunder is Eph's main damage output from all of his abilities and usually the primary output is the Q. *
Q: As stated above, this is more of a utility and less of primary damage, other than that it looks well done. *
W: This seems a little too close to Riven's W (I read the lore, but please dont make a copy champ), maybe rethink. *
E: As a utility this is useless however as a damage output this is near perfect, maybe have the cooldoen degrade to 10 second cooldown at 5th level. *
R: The only issue I had with this is that it only has a 375 cast range and it is a leap. That means the range is far less than Vayne's condemn. *Up the range and you'll be good.
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