The Explorer and Love (Ezreal and Lux)

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david12341

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06-20-2012

really good, but you made alot of grammer mistakes in the beggining paragraph.


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Nuriye

Junior Member

06-21-2012

love the story so far hope ya update soon ^^


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Ayriez

Member

06-22-2012

I mean, except that Ezreal has not a single care for the League. It's in his official lore that he finds it to be an unwanted thing >_>
Also, Ezreal x Riven all the way.


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Gnomeasauros

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06-22-2012

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Originally Posted by Ayriez View Post
I mean, except that Ezreal has not a single care for the League. It's in his official lore that he finds it to be an unwanted thing >_>
Also, Ezreal x Riven all the way.
Clearly, you DON'T understand what Fan Fiction is. This is my world of LoL.. It's how I think it should be. No need to leave comments like that on this.


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Newguy9854

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06-22-2012

Bump, really like this!


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the jakal

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06-23-2012

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Bump, really like this!
what does 'BUMP" mean?


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Ask Ezreal

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06-23-2012

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what does 'BUMP" mean?
It's a thing people say when they want the post to be bumped back up to the first page so more people can see it.

Also great story. just read all of it today Glad to see someone loves Ezreal as much as I do. I'll be waiting for more. <3


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GodsEye

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06-26-2012

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It's a thing people say when they want the post to be bumped back up to the first page so more people can see it.

Also great story. just read all of it today Glad to see someone loves Ezreal as much as I do. I'll be waiting for more. <3
.-. lol '' Ask Ezreal'' XD


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AsktheDeciever

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06-26-2012

Loving this so far! btw sup Ez.


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MiaoLong

Senior Member

06-26-2012

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Originally Posted by Gnomeasauros View Post
Clearly, you DON'T understand what Fan Fiction is. This is my world of LoL.. It's how I think it should be. No need to leave comments like that on this.
Hey now... it's a fair criticism, these stories are based of the game, so there's good reason to try and emulate their style. That said, I think your story is pretty **** good, it's a little choppy in some points, I'd look at improving the development of information in some places, but overall, I think you're doing quite well.