Guiding Light - A RivenXLux Fanfic

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Cerubois

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08-29-2012

Double post go!

Chapter 11 for you guys, 'cuz you're my favourite fans. Not like those other, evil fans who look at me funny. Or those fans who keep blowing air in my face. Those are rather annoying.
Anyway.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7599936/11/Guiding-Light


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Loso

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08-29-2012

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!


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Mah Digga

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08-29-2012

You, sir, have made my day.


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Flyt

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08-30-2012

You sure, have just made me the happiest mang alive. Because of you I'm also playing Riven again >____>


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steak style

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08-30-2012

yay excellent chapter as usual

one minor quibble in the first dialogue in this chapter. it's not a graphic novel; there should be a better way of conveying riven's silence than just an ellipsis in quote marks


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Cerubois

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08-30-2012

Quote:
Originally Posted by steak style View Post
yay excellent chapter as usual

one minor quibble in the first dialogue in this chapter. it's not a graphic novel; there should be a better way of conveying riven's silence than just an ellipsis in quote marks
You're probably right! I'll go back and check it out again.

I do have a tendency to imagine my stories as graphic novels as I write them. I guess I'm too much of a fan of that art style. XP

Edit: Fixed. Let me know if you find other things like that. Sometimes I need a heads-up so I don't get too absorbed in something. >.<


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A Chair Snare

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08-30-2012

Love the chapter, love the story, love you Ceru

Excellent job once again, can't wait for more.

Also, looks like I was right with my Yi prediction


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KobuZero

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08-30-2012

Another amazing chapter Ceru, cant wait for the next one


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Yasako

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08-31-2012

...heh, I was right about socially inept Lux.


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Riven Bt

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08-31-2012

Oh dear me this fan fic was amazing to read.I even got pretty emotional at some parts! I just can't wait for the next chapter. <3

Fantastic work so far~