Volibear ... :D

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Madriker

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12-08-2011

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Originally Posted by Canchelli View Post
any critics please ?
The spearhead needs some adjusting, it's a bit off center.

Voli's left arm (viewer's right) is too long. With the implied perspective, if you were to extend both arms out horizontally the left arm would be drastically longer than the right one. Raising the fist a bit would give a better sense of foreshortening.

Not sure if this was intentional, but the armor isn't symmetrical. Voli's left shoulder pad, for instance, is much larger in contrast to his right.

That's all I can provide for now. Very cool design, keep up the good work!


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Canchelli

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Originally Posted by Madriker View Post
The spearhead needs some adjusting, it's a bit off center.

Voli's left arm (viewer's right) is too long. With the implied perspective, if you were to extend both arms out horizontally the left arm would be drastically longer than the right one. Raising the fist a bit would give a better sense of foreshortening.

Not sure if this was intentional, but the armor isn't symmetrical. Voli's left shoulder pad, for instance, is much larger in contrast to his right.

That's all I can provide for now. Very cool design, keep up the good work!
tyvm ^^ ya about the armor not beeing symetrical it was on purpose the rest i ll work on it ^^


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