Zyra's Lore

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Pernx

Junior Member

02-08-2014

It's gone now! working on a better version....


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SecretLore

Senior Member

02-09-2014

while i liked the part about the girl,I think your story is kinda lacking,because in the end it is just zyra killing some random people


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Pernx

Junior Member

02-09-2014

True. Thanks for your imput!