Disrupting the Balance (Shen X Akali)

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FATGUYSAY

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03-04-2012

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Originally Posted by Ask Talon View Post
Shen: "Here Akali, drink this FALCON PUNCH"
That was cruel, but funny at the same time!

Anyway, please keep this story alive. I want MOAR!!


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HuggableZombie

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03-04-2012

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Uh-oh. There's something that just got into my mind. You said if you want to keep the story up long, you need to add an OC. Now could that OC actually be Shen's son? This would mean he spares the child... I'm curious what will happen.

And btw thanks for you comment on Shen's Journey. Means a lot from you, being a good writer yourself, you know what makes a story enjoyable.
I'm not a great writer. I still have MUCH to learn to truly be content with my writing abilities. But I appreciate that you think so highly of me, it really makes me want to improve my skills and drives me that much closer to wanting to become a great writer.

EDIT: I'd like to say my OC would be Shen's son/daughter, BUT it could also be an assassin sent to make sure Shen's son/daughter is actually dead. Lets think about that one for a moment...MUHAHAH!!


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Ask Talon

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03-05-2012

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I'm not a great writer. I still have MUCH to learn to truly be content with my writing abilities. But I appreciate that you think so highly of me, it really makes me want to improve my skills and drives me that much closer to wanting to become a great writer.

EDIT: I'd like to say my OC would be Shen's son/daughter, BUT it could also be an assassin sent to make sure Shen's son/daughter is actually dead. Lets think about that one for a moment...MUHAHAH!!
You can't afford my rates Summoner.

~Talon


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blackdeath17

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03-05-2012

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You can't afford my rates Summoner.

~Talon
kat will do it for pleasure xD


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HuggableZombie

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03-05-2012

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You can't afford my rates Summoner.

~Talon
Well I could always hire the following assassins:
Shaco (he'd EASILY agree to killing a child...he has done it before)
Katarina (I'm sure she'd enjoy killing any Ionian....ANY Ionian)
Evelyn (So long as there is screaming)
Nocturne (He probably won't mind being freed for a single task)
Mordekaiser (He's big, he's scary, and when he's near people, they go dead)
Assassin from the Kinkou order itself (Who cares about loyalty where there is balanced to be kept?)


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Ask Talon

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03-05-2012

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Well I could always hire the following assassins:
Shaco (he'd EASILY agree to killing a child...he has done it before)
Katarina (I'm sure she'd enjoy killing any Ionian....ANY Ionian)
Evelyn (So long as there is screaming)
Nocturne (He probably won't mind being freed for a single task)
Mordekaiser (He's big, he's scary, and when he's near people, they go dead)
Assassin from the Kinkou order itself (Who cares about loyalty where there is balanced to be kept?)
Read Nocturne's judgement... I doubt you would want to free him....

Also, wow, Talon is the least screwed up out of all of them... And his life was ****!


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HuggableZombie

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03-05-2012

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Read Nocturne's judgement... I doubt you would want to free him....

Also, wow, Talon is the least screwed up out of all of them... And his life was ****!
You'd be surprised what I'd summon had I given the chance...Fear MY PONIES!!!

Anyway, Talon isn't:

Born in the Shadow Isles (Morde, Eve)
From another dimension (Shaco)
A victim of SPD* (Katarina)
MADE to kill people (Noc)
Someone who is loyal to others (Kinkou assassin)

*SPD: Sadistic Personality Disorder


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Ask Talon

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03-05-2012

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Originally Posted by Zombiethekid View Post
You'd be surprised what I'd summon had I given the chance...Fear MY PONIES!!!

Anyway, Talon isn't:

Born in the Shadow Isles (Morde, Eve)
From another dimension (Shaco)
A victim of SPD* (Katarina)
MADE to kill people (Noc)
Someone who is loyal to others (Kinkou assassin)

*SPD: Sadistic Personality Disorder
Talon isn't what? >.>?

Also, you say SPD, Noxus says "Well Adjusted child"


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Astraltar

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03-06-2012

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Originally Posted by Zombiethekid View Post
Well I could always hire the following assassins:
Shaco (he'd EASILY agree to killing a child...he has done it before)
Katarina (I'm sure she'd enjoy killing any Ionian....ANY Ionian)
Evelyn (So long as there is screaming)
Nocturne (He probably won't mind being freed for a single task)
Mordekaiser (He's big, he's scary, and when he's near people, they go dead)
Assassin from the Kinkou order itself (Who cares about loyalty where there is balanced to be kept?)
Also, maybe Fiddlesticks could do it as well. He obeys orders without question.


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HuggableZombie

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03-06-2012

Announcement:

You know that I love you guys right? In fact, I love you so much that I came up with a way to stretch the actual story longer without using any real OC. Yes that's right, this story is using nothing but champions. Although you may not agree with my choice of champion for the job I'm giving him, everything will all soon be explained why he was picked. So grab your ax and sheath those shivs because this story will hopefully give you one hell of a ride.

EDIT: The 4th chapter is practically done. Well, the main part I wanted is done. Currently it has no Akali or Shen in it, so that must be fixed. But I promise to have it out before Sunday.