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[YOUSO1337 FANFICTION] The Dragon of Desolation (Leona-centric + OC)

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Still Eternity

Senior Member

02-11-2012

Anti-Troll Upvotes and complimentory Bump.


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Youso1337

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02-13-2012

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Anti-Troll Upvotes and complimentory Bump.
Thanks. Such a pain when someone just thumbs-downs every post you make, and they don't get punished for it.


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Prince of Prints

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02-14-2012

I'd like to start out by mentioning that when I first heard about your fanfic through the @Ironstylus post, I was a little hesitant to click. Mostly because several of my brief and painful delves into fanficdom have been excercises in mental cleansing, over exposure to hormones, and terrible writing.

Secondly, you've done none of those things. Your story was interesting, and your characterization is very strong. Plagueis as an OC character in particular is well done. He puts out the " I could kick your ass in a heartbeat " vibe rather well. In fact, you seem to capture all of the League's champions in a good light, keeping close to the script, and not flying off in some horrible "My Immortal" level escapades. There are small moments where there are slips in character, but eh, it's a fanfic, Artistic license is a perfect validation in these cases.

Also, about purple prose... me gusta.

Keep up the good work, thou hast earned an upvote.
PS. I hope IronStylus reads your thread. You're quite talented.


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Youso1337

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02-14-2012

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I'd like to start out by mentioning that when I first heard about your fanfic through the @Ironstylus post, I was a little hesitant to click. Mostly because several of my brief and painful delves into fanficdom have been excercises in mental cleansing, over exposure to hormones, and terrible writing.

Secondly, you've done none of those things. Your story was interesting, and your characterization is very strong. Plagueis as an OC character in particular is well done. He puts out the " I could kick your ass in a heartbeat " vibe rather well. In fact, you seem to capture all of the League's champions in a good light, keeping close to the script, and not flying off in some horrible "My Immortal" level escapades. There are small moments where there are slips in character, but eh, it's a fanfic, Artistic license is a perfect validation in these cases.

Also, about purple prose... me gusta.

Keep up the good work, thou hast earned an upvote.
PS. I hope IronStylus reads your thread. You're quite talented.
Thanks. I know a lot of the fanfics that can be floating around are pretty much trash, so I try to avoid that by making my story worthwhile.

Glad you like Plagueis. Trust me, he'll continue to be badass in future chapters. Yeessss...


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RavenHusky

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02-24-2012

I want to see this story continue.


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Youso1337

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02-25-2012

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I want to see this story continue.
Working on it, but have to put certain higher priorities first.


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RavenHusky

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02-25-2012

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Working on it, but have to put certain higher priorities first.
Fair enough.


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Leviathan faerie

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02-29-2012

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Fair enough.
psssssssssshhhhhhhh he lies! >.<


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Youso1337

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02-29-2012

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psssssssssshhhhhhhh he lies! >.<
Mid-terms and assignments are a higher priority to me than fanfiction. Sad, but necessary.


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Leviathan faerie

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02-29-2012

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Mid-terms and assignments are a higher priority to me than fanfiction. Sad, but necessary.
heh i know, just being selfish


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