Teemo Diaries

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EveforAll

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04-29-2013

this is so good


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Blokfort

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04-29-2013

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Originally Posted by Draxy View Post
Well, it's a little predictable, but not too bad.
By all means, tell us what happens next oh wise sage.


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Bromarcia

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04-29-2013

omg never F5'd so much in my life.


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Xelnath

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04-30-2013
2 of 4 Riot Posts

This is exciting! I can't wait to see who gets eaten next.


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Tetramaster

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04-30-2013

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This is exciting! I can't wait to see who gets eaten next.
*Smack*

No. No people being eaten.

Hopefully.

Maybe.

....


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Draxy

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04-30-2013

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By all means, tell us what happens next oh wise sage.
I'm not being mean, just a few classic twists that some people might have seen done in other works so you kind of expect them when you see the setup. Basically things like "someone who thinks they are losing their mind", and the classic "maybe they are the bad guy but don't remember it afterwards" scenario, followed by the classic "when we looked there was nothing out of the ordinary", etc etc. Classic stuff but the piece meal delivery is good for drawing you in regardless.

It's a nice little read though and I'm entertained so I won't critique it any more in case others take offense.


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Bad Luck Braum

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04-30-2013

actually is dolan?


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Iron Angel 2k3

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04-30-2013

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actually is dolan?
For dinner: ass rice soup


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Rauron

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04-30-2013

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I'm not being mean, just a few classic twists that some people might have seen done in other works so you kind of expect them when you see the setup.
I agree with this. There's also the fact that Teemo's madness is pretty much canon. That being said, OP is making this up on the fly, so of course tropes will appear. It's fine, but something being okay doesn't mean it's not true; that would be a really silly argument.


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Romantic Metro

Senior Member

04-30-2013

bump this is awesome reminds me of spooky stories the 3 part story books lol