CCFC Review Thread, Mark 3!

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Wulffe

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Greetings, Summoners!

Just your friendly neighborhood wannabe superhero Wulffe here bringing you the brand new and improved Champion Concept Forum Council (CCFC) Review Forum, Mark III. We've undergone a huge turnover recently and I'm here to breathe some life back into our review thread. So now I'm both categorizing your champs and making sure they get the love and notice they deserve!

There's only one catch: In order to get a review you've must have done a review yourself. 'But I'm horrible at reviewing people! D:' you might say, but what if I provided you with the tools to succeeded? Behold!

Tips on how to do a good review:
(Taken from the Mark 2 thread)


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- Tone: This is paramount. Think carefully about how you phrase things; do not condescend, do not mock. Yes, an ability that deals 5,000 true damage in an 1100 unit AoE is.... a bit much. But there is a civil way in which you can word your review to advise the summoner that their numbers may be off. If a summoner makes such a major oversight, it could simply be that numbers are not their strength; provide examples to existing champions with similar abilities so that the Summoner may have a reference point.

- Neutrality: The purpose of a review is to help a fellow Summoner's idea grow, not to force your opinion upon them. If you provide a suggestion for improvement and it is denied, do not take offense or try to press the issue; in the end it is the Summoner's choice to accept the help they are offered.

- Coverage: No worries! You don't need to write an essay. =P All you need to do is touch on the basic points, outlined in the format below.

Overall Theme: Does this character make sense? Is this character relevant to the League of Legends World? Do the abilities function well with who the character is?

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Ability Reviews: You don't have to be a number whiz to review abilities; do these abilities have a sense of synergy as an overall kit? Do they function with the intended role? Crucial: Are they simple enough? Overly complex mechanics can be the downfall of an idea. How can a complex ability be streamlined?

If you are more comfortable with numbers, feel free to offer balance advice. It is oftentimes helpful to explain why a stat is under or over-powered; a simple way to do this is to refer to an existing champion; "X champion has a similar ability, and it does Y. You can add/subtract Z to this ability to make it more balanced."

Lore: Look for spelling/grammar/syntax errors where you can, as well as point out any inconsistencies in backstory. Good lore should answer the following questions; "Where did this champion come from?" "Where do their powers/skills come from?" "Why are they joining the League?"

Closing: Sum up and clarify your review, state the strongest and weakest points of the concept, encourage the Summoner to continue investing effort into their idea.
The community is not alone in this effort as our councilmen will also be helping where we can. Due to being short manpower we are stretched thin but will try to make time in sharing our views with you and helping to build better champions.

The following members are those that volunteer to assist where they can in this:
(List is subject to change pending different information)

Bergmeister - Unknown, helps as needed.
FlamesofTerror - Does everything except League Judgments.
Moby the White - He's just generally helpful.
Poet Ultima - Does everything but numbers, excels at League Judgments.
Wulffe - Jack of all trades, master of none. Will try to help as needed.


Notes and Info

If you want to link a review you received in this thread, the process is simple:
1) Find the page in your thread that the review was made on and copy the url.
2) Paste the url into a url tag in your forum post to this thread.
3) Append #post to the end of the url.
4) Go back to the review and click on the quote button, this should open up a post page with the quote inside.
5) Look for the following "[QUOTE=name;numbers]"
6) Copy ONLY the numbers and paste those after the #post in your url.
7) Close out the url tag, you have now successfully linked to the review.
(Thanks Chamenas)


Quote:
Post Example:

Hello, I'm Wulffe!

I reviewed Dante, the Darkslayer, page 3.

If y'all could review Tempest Swain, the Ethereal Sorceress I'd greatly appreciate it!

Note:

Feel free to add details about the champ you reviewed, what you liked about them, what their strengths and/or weaknesses are, etc.
A list of champs to review can be found here.


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Wulffe

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Council Completed Reviews

Aliara, Child of the Void - Skyhawk47 (former council)
Arilian, Queen of the Elements - FlamesofTerror
Armaorum The Weapons Master - FlamesofTerror
Arkan, the Distortion - Skyhawk47(former council)
Barrymore, the Hallowed Thespian - Poet Ultima
Bianca, the Forsworn"]Bianca, the Forsworn[/URL] - Neowolf24 (Volunteer)
Cedric, the Blade's Anger - Poet Ultima
Ciana, Light of the Sun - FlamesofTerror, Poet Ultima, ploki122 (former council)
Crackles, the Firework Merchant - FlamesofTerror
Dante, the Darkslayer - The5lacker (Volunteer)
Dredger, Master of the Earth - FlamesofTerror, ploki122 (former council)
Ferrus, the Hex-Terran Mountaineer - Skyhawk47 (former council)
Gallow, the Midnight Stalker - Havoc202
Harin, the Geomancer - Wulffe
Ibrahim, the Painter of Life - iZianni
Icarus, Ionian Hope] - iZianni
Jos', the Spacial Messenger - FlamesofTerror
Kaj'naar, the Living Evolution - Skyhawk47(former council)
Kravia, the Seal Master - FlamesofTerror
Law, the Judge of Souls - FlamesofTerror
Niat Lornhart, the Guiding Soul - Skyhawk47(former council)
Oberon, the Dimorphic - FlamesofTerror, ploki122(former council)
Omega, The Last Champion - iZianni
Quintis, The Master of the Elemental Spirits - The Blawnzed Elf(former council)
Quinn, the Elastic Wasteband - Mindworm Jim (Volunteer)
Rango, The Cursed Gunslinger - iZianni
Rakthom, Lord of Deceit - Wulffe
Sandra, the Potion Maker - The Blawnzed Elf(former council), ploki122(former council)
Shia, the Void's Timid Doppelganger - Wulffe
Shu'gareth, the Whisperer of Madness - Skyhawk47(former council)
Silva, the Illusionist -FlamesofTerror, Skyhawk47(former council)
Svengali, the Malificent Manipulator - iZianni
Thrash, the Tormented Punisher - Gundenspand(former council)
Vermillion, the Supersonic Prodigy - Skyhawk47(former council)
Vespa, The Swarm of Hate - Skyhawk47(former council)
Vudu, the Witch Doctor - Neowolf24 (Volunteer)
Yaakov, the Divine Pilgrim - FlamesofTerror
Zaria, the Water Dancer - FlamesofTerror
Zarek, the Kinkou Gadgeteer - Poet Ultima, SkyHawk47(former council)
Zevriel, the Destroyer of Cities - ploki122(former council)


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Wulffe

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Review Requests
(If list exceeds 20 champs there will be a temporary hold on new requests until we can play catch up.)

Akecheta, Guardian of the Plans
Atnas, the Giver of the North
Crucius, the Scion of Madness
El Pollo Loco, Luchadore Extraordinaire
Feilig, the Coward
Fola, the Eccentric Scientist
Kabikod, the Nomadic Merchant


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Wulffe

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Annnd....Mark 3 is go!


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Moby the White

Senior Member

12-03-2012

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Originally Posted by Wulffe View Post
Greetings, Summoners!

The following members are those that volunteer to assist where they can in this:
(List is subject to change pending different information)

Bergmeister - Unknown, helps as needed.
FlamesofTerror - Does everything except League Judgments.
Moby the White - He's just generally helpful.
Poet Ultima - Does everything but numbers, excels at League Judgments.
Wulffe - Jack of all trades, master of none. Will try to help as needed.

yep


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Wulffe

Senior Member

12-03-2012

You quoted almost the whole thing just to bold that part? xD


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Moby the White

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wulffe View Post
You quoted almost the whole thing just to bold that part? xD
yep


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The5lacker

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Stroke your ego a bit more, why don't you? XD

Thinking of placing a few review requests in, get a bit of traffic to poor Harin.


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Wulffe

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Go for it. I have nothing better to do right now. I'm watching a demanding 5 year old who isn't letting me sit for too long or watch my shows. -.-


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The5lacker

Senior Member

12-03-2012

Hello hello, I'm looking for a review on my champion Harin, the Geomancer. If anyone would like to do a review trade, drop by and lemme know who you'd like my opinion on.


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