[Champion Concept]-Derel,The spirit Whisper(AP)

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Trustengineer

Junior Member

09-10-2012

Derel:Soul slender

EDIT 1=Change ms and mr values,explanation about the ultimate for special case.
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Ap caster

Damage 55 (+3 / per level)
Health 360 (+86 / per level)
Ability Power 0 (+3/level
Mana 250 (+55 / per level)
Move Speed 315
Armor 15 (+3.9 / per level)
Spell Block 30 (+0 / per level)
Health Regen 4.20 (+0.20 / per level)
Mana Regen 5 (+0.7 / per level)


Passive:anger ghost:every 4 attack or ability,Derel will improve the next ability he use(exept his ulti)


Q:Torment

launch a bolt wich dealt 50/75/100/150/200(+0.3ap)magic damage.During 3 second,the target deal 50% of the damage as aoe around him.

Angry ghost:in additionnal,the ghost torment the target and inflict (0.2 ap) magic damage in 3 seconde.


W= Desecrated ground:An aoe wich reduce enemy movement speed by 8-10-12-14-16 %.If more enemy champion cross the aoe,it will expand quickly.

Angry ghost:In additionnal,the aoe deal (.05-1-1.5-2-2.5+1%/100ap) maxlife to enemy champions

R:Medium

Derel split his soul from its body shell, creating a clone for 2 seconde.During this time Derel can not launch an attack, skill, and his field of vision is reduced to its own, but becomes unable to slow / stun /change area and reduces damage by 30%.

Angry ghost:The clone last 4 seconde,can move and inflict (0.3ap) true damage if he die/dissapear.


R:Shard's soul siphon

Derel target an enemy champion.During 8 seconde Derel can perform the ultimate skill of his target,the damage are reduce by 20%(20-15-10) but the initial damange and armor/magic penetration are took from the target.

The following champion will have special effect/another spell copied/explanation

Jayce=Copy his q in range mod/copy his e in melee mode
Karma=copy his Q with mantra effect
Heimedinger=allow Derel to launch 5 missile instantly
Kogmaw=allow him to launch 3 time ultimate
Leblanc=Copy the mimic aility and not the last spell she use
Nidalee:copy the spear
Orianna:allow derel to use ultimate where he is.
Rengar:copy the champion detection and stealth
Riven=copy the shockwave ultimate
Shyvana=Transform derel into dragon(with the jump)and gain magic/armor resist
Swain=allow derel to transform into bird monster
Twich=Derel attack pierce and inflict venom
Udyr=Copy one of his stance
Vayne=Derel gain 40 attack and get steal every 2 second for 1 seconde
xerath=allow him to use three time his ultimate


If you have anny suggestion,post it.Ask Question about the ultimate(i will check if another champion ultimate can occur issues.)


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Trustengineer

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09-12-2012

Bump for post


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DryRun

Senior Member

09-12-2012

here is a very quick review!

stats -
ms too high, should be 315 for casters, ad might be too high, MR should be flat 30 for ranged chars

Q -
really like it also separates them from group, subtle and effective

W -
also great, i like an expanding circle baised on number of enemies in it

E -
if he is a ghost he should stealth out like wukong?

R -
you need some clarity on this spell, also i would simplify it, its hard to memorize 100+ different modifiers on one ability.

over all has a lot of potential, check out my wisp! at http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=2480557


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Trustengineer

Junior Member

09-12-2012

After this answer i will check your champ(but really funny we got same name^^)

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ms too high, should be 315 for casters, ad might be too high, MR should be flat 30 for ranged chars
Yea after rewiew,it's a little too much,i wanted to have a mobile champion,but i think mp boot wll be enough

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if he is a ghost he should stealth out like wukong?
In fact when he activate the ability,it create a clone of myself (wich allow to dodge grap,spear ect...)The real champion became unable to slow stun and bump(like alistar),ca'nt cast spell and have vision reduce,but he's still visible.

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you need some clarity on this spell, also i would simplify it, its hard to memorize 100+ different modifiers on one ability.
That's simple,there will be 2 type of champion
-champion wich ahve ulti copied
-champion will have another spell copied=

why?because like nidalee jayce and karma doesn't have ulti,so i have to copy another spell from them.But also there is few champion like hemeidinger.His ultimate allow him to have his tower more powerfull,his ball faster,and more missile,if I only have his ultimate,it's useless because i dont have the other heime spell.

I will made a list wich all effect of ultimate.

The following champion will have special effect/another spell copied/explanation

Jayce=Copy his q in range mod/copy his e in melee mode
Karma=copy his Q with mantra effect
Heimedinger=allow Derel to launch 5 missile instantly
Kogmaw=allow him to launch 3 time ultimate
Leblanc=Copy the mimic aility and not the last spell she use
Nidalee:copy the spear
Orianna:allow derel to use ultimate where he is.
Rengar:copy the champion detection and stealth
Riven=copy the shockwave ultimate
Shyvana=Transform derel into dragon(with the jump)and gain magic/armor resist
Swain=allow derel to transform into bird monster
Twich=Derel attack pierce and inflict venom
Udyr=Copy one of his stance
Vayne=Derel gain 40 attack and get steal every 2 second for 1 seconde
xerath=allow him to use three time his ultimate


Some ultimate can be at first view useless,but be strategic,think quickly,every ultimate can have functions.


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Trustengineer

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09-16-2012

Bump for the win