The Assassin's Soul -Poem, A verbal fan art.

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Iridium Devil

Member

05-03-2012

The choir sings, a stirring song,
Of screams and cries now long gone.
The shadows know, and tell a tale,
Where bolts and arrows and daggers hail.
The wind speaks of my speed and grace,
With jealousy, a comparison it cannot face.
And in the quiet, the stillness lures,
You to the center, where the Chaos stirs.

In the dark, I stalk my prey.
A hunter, a killer, I move so swift.
So you'll miss the light of day,
I make use of my deadly gift.
Toxins lurch, and fill your veins,
I dodge between, I have no lanes.
No borders to call my own,
Your shadow is my only home.
So walk along, and never know.
Ignorance, as they say, is bliss.
Your blood, like my insanity will flow.
A painless death, I can grant you this.
For in the quiet, the unknown lures,
You to the center, where the Chaos stirs.

Perhaps I'm mad, but it seems to me,
The greatest kindness I can grant,
Is a swift death you could never see,
Surviving, a simple task you shant,
Achieve, alive a state you cannot be.
Too much pain, for you and I,
If you simply do not die.
My team agrees, you must understand,
You cannot be allowed to walk this land.
A dangerous foe, a powerful force to be sure,
But only death in the center, where the chaos stirs.

Perhaps now you understand and finally see,
What must be done to you, by me.
Do not feel bad, it is not personal.
My hatred, you see, is universal.
I live only to see all in my way,
Tint the air a copper texture today,
Every day, only the same, so the shadows say.
They speak a tale, of where the corpses lay,
In the quiet, the darkness that still lures,
The bodies lay in the center, where the chaos stirs.

The Assassin's Soul II:
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...9#post27011679

I Am Tank:
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...hlight=am+tank

Fury Of The Jungle:
http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...5#post27107165


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OzScorcher

Junior Member

05-04-2012

Nice but I think your tank one flowed better.
Make one for junglers next


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Ballistah

Junior Member

05-04-2012

Pretty cool. I was never much of a poet myself, but I had a lot of fun reading it. Congratulations on getting featured in the Summoner's Showcase, by the way.

Am I the only person who thinks this poem was heavily inspired by Shaco?


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iwilleaturwafles

Junior Member

05-04-2012

Reminds me of twitch, or really anyone that uses arrows. But the insanity party does remind me a bit of Shaco


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EroKagami

Junior Member

05-04-2012

Really nice, u do great poems, keep doing it so well!


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Fatman5

Junior Member

05-04-2012

*rightous fistbump* legit


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Kushanu

Junior Member

05-04-2012

this is rather impressive, and I'm glad I got to read it. Though, I agree that it could flow better, but those can be minor grammatical fixes. For example in the line in the second stanza that reads:

Ignorance is, as they say, bliss.

if you simply changed it to:

Ignorance, as they say, is bliss

so it still keeps it's syllables the same and will flow a little more smoothly *smiles* But still, wonderful work. keep up the writing, and I look forward to reading your next one


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Dux Steve

Senior Member

05-04-2012

This is actually extremely good. I don't think it's quite as good as your Tank poem, but that's simply because I'm our teams main tank/jungler every game I play.

Could you make one for junglers next?


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Dead Ráibéad

Junior Member

05-04-2012

LOVE IT! really good i like how you write the poem in the mindset of an assassin. you wrote the tank one in the mindset of a tank and it just works so good dude!


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Kealthaz

Junior Member

05-04-2012

reminds me so much of shaco <3


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