||12-19-2012 10:19 PM
Looking for someone to review your champs?
I'm Dzanio, and I enjoy looking at different champion concepts and helping people more fully develop their awesome champion ideas.
My favorite aspects of champion design are creating synergy, balance (if I like your concept I'll do lots of numbers crunching for you :) ), and promoting ease of use.
Writing is not a strong suit of mine, I'm happy to brainstorm ideas for backstories or what have you, but dislike actually writing them; Moby the White is probably your guy for lore revisions/ideas. Oddly enough I don't like numbers as a means of feedback on champion design however, and will generally give you walls of text filled with logical arguements (the horror).
If you post a link to your concept on the forums I'll do my best to do give an in depth review of your champion. Fair warning; interesting champions will probably get more attention, and longer reviews.
EDIT: Please feel free to give feedback on my feedback; I appreciate learning how I can assist you better. I'll try to look back at your concepts periodically to see how you've responded to my posts.
EDIT 2: Please be so kind as to include the name of your champion along w/ the review request; it makes sorting out which ones I've done already sooo much easier.
STATUS EDIT: At school, reviews will come as I have free time -- I plan to check this at least twice a week.
Moby the White has begun offering his most gracious assistance to anyone finding this thread, his services, and links to his threads are included below:
This is my main thread: Moby the White's stuff and other stuff.
Services I render:
Lorecrafting- I craft lore for other concepts
Lore reworks- I take what you have and write a new lore as close to as what you wrote as possible trying to improve it in as many areas as possible. I keep what ever areas I deem salvageable.
Lore revisions- I go through all of your mistakes and correct them.
Rated reviews- I review your entire concept based on the Lore PQWER system and give it an overall rating.
Written reviews- I review your entire concept and tell you what I think of it in prose form.
Full reviews- I combine the two previous methods when reviewing your entire concept.
Disclaimer: Currently I am only accepting Lore reviews. This is due to my hand suffering from carpal tunnel and I wish to keep the amount of typing to a minimum.
A great resource for those who want immediate feedback:
Moby, on behalf of the CCF Council, has been nice enough to set up an internet relay chat on mibbit; participation is free and does not require creating an account. Simply click "launch the app" (hidden below the sign up button in the box at the top of the page), click server, and enter the above info with whatever personal identifier you wish to use.