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Leo Tomita 09-16-2012 11:11 AM

Marcus Orelius - the Juggernaut
 
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Lore
I will soon re-write it.
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Innate: Juggernaut
Marcus gains Attack Damage equal to 2.5% of his bonus health and bonus health equal to 140% of his Attack Damage. These bonuses do not stack with themselves.
ex: exact LoLWiki numbers of Vladimir

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Q: Strangulate/Throw
Marcus stuns a nearby champion (within range: 125) and begins channeling. While Marcus channels, he deals damage to the target while healing himself, and the target remains stunned. At anytime during the channel, Marcus can activate Throw, and cancel the channel. If Marcus uses Throw, the target is knocked back in that direction, takes additional damage, and is slowed. Note: The slow lasts twice as long as the remaining time left on Strangulate's channel when Throw was activated.

Strangulate Damage: 150, 175, 200, 225, 250 % of total AD over 1 second
Self-Heal: 100% damage dealt by Strangulate + 5% Marcus's total Health
Throw Damage: 40, 80, 120, 160, 200 (+0.3 AD)
Slow: 20, 22.5, 25, 27.5, 30% for 2 seconds
Health Cost: Strangulate 0, Throw 5% of current life
Cooldown: 10 seconds (if cast Throw) the cooldown goes to 15


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W: Ironclaw
After one second casting, Marcus closes his only hand with such strength that he sends a shockwave around him. Desorienting all enemies, desoriented enemies have their sight reduced by 90%, and walks randomly for a short duration.
ex: Desorient works exactly like fear, but it also removes sigth from enemies affected by Ironclaw

Damage: 50, 75, 100, 125, 150 (+ 0.5 AD)
Desorient Time: 1, 1.25, 1.5, 1.75, 2 seconds
Health Cost: 50, 75, 100, 125, 150 Health
Cooldown: 15


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E: Tough Enough
Marcus's vampiric skin grants him a supernatural toughness, making him a difficult opponet to bring down.
Passive: Marcus receive less damage from all sources.
Active: When cast some dmg physical/magical is converted in total for 3 seconds this bonus are lost after 5 seconds.

Passive Damage Reduction: 10, 11.25, 12.5, 13.75, 15% from all sources rebalanced from (6, 9.5, 13, 16.5, 20%)
Damage Convertion: 50, 54, 58, 62, 66% into Health
Health Cost: 0
Cooldown: 12

ex:Veigar cast a Meteore with 1000 dmg, Marcus will reduce that dmg to 800, wich will grant him 462 Total health and deal 232 dmg on Marcus, after the effect runs off Marcus will have 462 health points less.I know it looks OP but if the player doesnt know how to use it, he will be burned to the ground like everybody else.
ex˛: This bonus health ativates his Innate.



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R: (ultimate) Try Again
When casted or killed Marcus explodes dealing physical damage equal to a percentage of his total life and releasing pieces of him in a area, if the pieces aren't destroyed in few seconds he comes back to life with health equal to the percentage of the pieces remaining.The pieces fly over walls and are destroyed with 1 basic attack or skill-shot but they are immune to AOE skills and last 5 seconds.
ex:when lvl 6 he dies...release 3 pieces but only one piece is destroyed...after few seconds hes back with 66% of health
ex˛:The pieces fly over walls, go random


Damage: 100, 250, 350 (+ 10% total health)
Pieces: 3, 4, 5
AoE: 700
Health Cost:0
Cooldown: 240, 220, 200

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Statistics
Health: 10/10
Damage: 10/10
Spell: 5/10
Dificulty: 4/10

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Base Stats:

Health: 420 (+ 100) at lvl18 2220
Attack Damage: 48 (+ 2.2) at lvl18 87.6
Attack Speed: 0.8 (+1%) at lvl 18 = 0.915
Armor: 16.5 (+3.1) at lvl18 = 72.3
Magic Resist: 30 (+1.25) at lvl18 = 52.5
Range: 155
Movement Speed: 340

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Quotes

Upon Selection: Now you can rest team, i'll be encharge of them.

Moving/Attacking:
WHAT!?
Where?
Come out! Come out! Wherever you are!
Hide and seek? My favorite game!
The problem is stop.
Going!!
Ohhhh! C'mon! i dont bite!
Crusha thy fools!
Thirsty!
I'll bleed you out.
Needing A hand comrade?
Sorry for that!

Taunt: You want a pice of me? HUMPF! You have a loooong way ahead!
You can try! Many try, but i am STILL here so...

Joke:Imagine if i have a REAL weapon.... or both hands.

Dance:Like a crazy rocker in the mosh pit hearing Sepultura.

Dying Animation:He bleeds out until dry and trying to stop the hemorrage, he get skinny and turns to dust.
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Leo Tomita 09-20-2012 03:28 PM

cleaned

Doom Puppy 09-20-2012 04:11 PM

Cool, but a little less obviously the name of a roman emperor.

WindGuy101 09-20-2012 07:25 PM

So if you go four blood thirsters with max stacks he will get 350x4=1,400 health plus @ level 18 (436) granting 1,836 bonus health. Vamp will be 80% per attack. Stragulate and throw 100% damage dealt is healed plus 5% of of total health (4,362){5% of 4,362 is 218}. That heal would be roughly 618 every 15 seconds which is also 41 hp per second for just using one basic ability. Add 20% damage reduction and increase 100% heal too 250% since AD is increased by that much... well you get the idea. Just throwing numbers out there. Nice concept and look forward to your progress.

laxmidi 09-20-2012 07:50 PM

Seems like a great idea hope they try to make him

Veragoot 09-20-2012 08:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Doom Puppy (Hozzászólás 29477994)
Cool, but a little less obviously the name of a roman emperor.


My name is Maximus Decimus Meridius, commander of the Armies of the North, General of the Felix Legions, loyal servant to the true emperor, Marcus Aurelius. Father to a murdered son, husband to a murdered wife. And I will have my vengeance, in this life or the next.

Leo Tomita 10-01-2012 06:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Veragoot (Hozzászólás 29487627)
My name is Maximus Decimus Meridius, commander of the Armies of the North, General of the Felix Legions, loyal servant to the true emperor, Marcus Aurelius. Father to a murdered son, husband to a murdered wife. And I will have my vengeance, in this life or the next.

excelent movie!!!

Leo Tomita 10-03-2012 04:56 PM

2 marcus?!

Cask iron Pan 10-20-2012 10:43 AM

okay... i'm sorry. It took me a really long time to read and understand everything you wrote, mostly because you're missing letters, words, using the wrong conjugations, and there are a few typos. (Sorry to be a grammar nazi, but if you want more people to review it...)

For instance: Iron Claw:
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Marcus close his only hand with such strength that after one second cast at 155 distance, the enemies ahead of him in a 300 AOE get damaged and desoriented for few seconds.
ex: Desorient works exactly like fear, but it also removes sigth from enemies affected by Ironclaw
*Marcus closes
*strength that, after one second
I'm not even sure what "cast at 155 distance" means since the AoE (Cone?) has a range of 300
small typo *sight
Quick note: usually I put a brief description of the skill first, and leaves all the numbers out of it just so not to clutter the description. And that way you can explain in more detail what each number means.

Okay, now to the actually material.

Tough enough, yes it does look OP because it is. 5 seconds. That's basically all the ultimates from the enemy team. I would lower it's duration.

I just think that this guy is ridiculously OP.

As a Dps he has too many tools that tell enemies not to focus him until all his teams carries are dead. If you want to look at other dps'ers Olaf only has his ultimate, Jax only has his e, shen has his shield, garen has his w, riven has her shield, Darius just doesn't die if someone's built him right, Eve has her shield, etc. anyway, point being they all only have one, a couple have arguably 2, but your champion has not only 1 not 2, but arguably every single one of his skills is a reason not to focus him. he'll heal if a melee attacks him, and throw them back into the enemy team, a well-placed iron claw could shut down an entire team, a role almost always reserved for ultimates, his e basically counters everything ever, and his ult is his e on steroids.

And as a tank he just would never die. Ever. He's like Cho, or Mundo, but with an inbuilt revive.

Anyway, I don't have many suggestions (sorry), but those are my thoughts.

SwaggerOats 11-02-2012 09:55 PM

Wow, this guys looks too intense.


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